OMG, you like Jubei Chan AND X-men Evolutioin? RAWK ON! :D I really like this fic. There were only two errors, and they were typos so I don't know why everyone's picking on that. :P And . . . *raises eyebrow* Todd died? I er, missed that. XD
Excellent fic! :D

good

Wah! Toddy died! Thats so sad! I like him! He's one of my fave characters! Wah!

This was pretty good, but it would help it alot if you did a spell check. Good work!

I liked it. - Todd is definetly my fave character, especialy since most of the x-men are steriotypical and two demensional from the few eps I've seen. It's funny, Todd's one of those outcast characters who manages to snag himself a cult following of fans. If only people liked real life outcasts, man, I'd have it made! lol!

Cute! Poor guy, I just wanna hug 'im! I don't care about how bad he smells! I'll hug 'im anyways!

Aside from the numerous typoes and grammatical errors, this was really good! I love Toddage. Write more!

Cool fic! Did you make up the words in ittalics (sp?) or are they lyrics to a song? Are you going to write more of this fic? You should.

Now, wait... I'm confused. "Scott Summers would pay dfor what he did! What the hell was wrong with him? How could he invite him, and then have the

weather weirdo start attacking him?" Todd wasn't invited to the Mansion, Mystique ordered him to infiltrate. I never understood why Xavier had to actually test Todd for the X Gene, I mean, durf. It's pretty obvious. Some weird plot hole, I guess. ::shrugs:: But you've got a plot hole here, too, it seems. Unless I've recalled the episode incorrectly.

awesome. todd does have a mind of his own. the x-men ARE hypocrites (totally doubt that i spelled that right...) and annoying. i liked this a lot.

Man did I start something when I used the word "toddage" or what? *cackles* I COINED A PHRASE! *gets excited and jumps around* anyway, cool story. Todd is my hero. I love TODD! Po0r little guy! and he listens to HIMSELF! NOT MAGNETO! yay! :D

This was a sweet story. A sort of bittersweet Toddy-fic. (Toddy rocks, by the way). I liked it. There were some spelling and grammar errors, but they were mostly just typos and other quick-fixes. Anyway, cute fic!