Interesting. I like this character. Plain but kind is a fairly normal persona in fairy tails and such, but in todays society, it is a rare find indeed. Nice job.

I really am looking forward to more. :D

*giggles* I like this side of Kyuubi. :D I think he was meant to be a vicious beast and all, but this is really SO cute!

My only problem, Kohona has maybe been around for a hundred years, or a little longer if you stretch out the rulings of the Hokage's. I'm hoping you have a good explanation for us not knowing about the Naka clan, (kind of makes it sound like Kohona's been there for several years...although I could see this being due to the fact that demons and humans don't often coinside) and I'm also looking forward to seeing what actually happens.

It's good so far.