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Aphina 2008-01-31 ch 8,	abuseHey, I've been hearing good things about your fics! I'm glad to see it;s true. You've obviously worked hard on your OC and it shows. I really love the char you've created and you capture the complexity of all the realtionships well. Leda fits in wellw ith teh CSI universe and she has her own life too. You capture the emotions we all go through at some point in our lives well and it's something we can assocaite with. This last chapter was fab! I've been roothing for her to dump Robert for ages and I lvoe the way Flack seems to care abut Leda so much. The way you paint Danny really rings true to this char. I can't wait to see what else you have cooked up.
Axellia 2007-12-31 ch 5,	abuseSo, new year got in the way of me reading this chapter straight after the previous... alright, so maybe two dvds, some playing on my playstation, and a little bit of writing, also got in the way... ahem... I mean... I celebrated New Year in style... ok, no, I stayed in. But I figured I would treat myself to another chapter before bed (and it is a treat!), though I think I may end up reading a second. I loved the exchange with Lindsay - thinking back to my frustrations with last season, that girl definately needed to talk to someone - and to set her straight too.
Axellia 2007-12-31 ch 4,	abuseIt occured to me that I hadn't heard from you, and I was getting a little worried - so I checked to see if you had updated anything recently... and then I noticed that I had started reading this and then stopped. So I started it all over again! And first of all, let me say, you have me blushing before you even started your chapter - with the disclaimer. I'm touched, and honored... and wondering if the possibility of borrowing Leda would be alright with you?! As for the story itself... One think I love about your works are how much effort you put into your characters - they are well thought out and very believeable. I think she's (Leda) wise beyond her years!
Yemam2422 2007-08-17 ch 8,	abuseI'm really enjoying this story. I initially started reading it when you originally posted it way back when but I stopped after the first few chapters and can't remember why. It certainly wasn't because it wasn't well written. I think at the time I was in major D/L mode and it took a lot for a story to hold my attention especially if it wasn't D/L centric off the bat. Anyway, I started rereading this story again after your most recent update and I am so glad I did. You've crafted an very intriguing story and I love the tangled web of Danny/Lindsay/Flack/Leda that you've woven. I think in the beginning I was asking 'who is this Leda person' and know I find myself saying 'I love this Leda person'. There's so much depth to her and I appreciate her relationship with Danny (which my D/L shipper heart originally wasn't appreciating) and I'm loving the way she's impacting the CSIs lives. She's a wonderful original character. Sorry for the lengthy review. Great job!
sparkyCSI 2007-08-13 ch 8,	abuseOMG! That was so worth the wait. I'm sorry to hear about your grandfather. Anyway. I have hope that everything will work out with Flack/Leda and Danny/Lindsay. :D
Madison Bellows 2007-08-13 ch 8,	abuseThis is me sitting here anxiously awaiting more. Just thought you should know :)
Madison Bellows 2007-08-13 ch 4,	abuseI had to crack up when Leda is talking about not fitting the same mold, because it is the exact opposite of when talking to all my therapist friends, they all tell me I am too "normal and together" to be one of them :)!
demolished-soul 2007-08-12 ch 8,	abuseAll I can do is gasp! Oh, man! Everything has gone all crazy! What's going to happen next?!
Soccer-Bitch 2007-08-12 ch 8,	abuseLOVED this chapter. i can't wait for the next ones. ^_^
Caitlin 2007-07-29 ch 7, anon.	abuseHey, this is a great story, you have really got something here. it's cool that the heroine is a psychologist. I want to be a Forensic Psychologist myself, and hopefully work for the police in boston or chicago. I like Leda,just because she knows how to help peolpe with her problems, doesn't mean that she can fix herself. I like Mike Tyler. I hope you play with him and Leda, and maybe cause some tension between her and Flack. I just started with CSI:NY, and I watch all three CSI's, Miami being my fav. I checked out your profile, and I just finished AP Lit myself, and I love reading too. I also love that you are strong about your Christian Faith. I'm a Christian too, and I love that you keep explicit things out. It's great that your public about your faith, esp ecause of whats going on in todays world. Please, update ASAP! oh, I love how you chose Flack, he's gorgeous! Oh, do you hate Math? b'c if you do, you are like my twin or something! Oh, and I've never dyed my hair either!
Soccer-Bitch 2007-07-17 ch 7,	abuseawesome chapter! i loved it and am really looking forward to the next ones. ^_^
daytimedrama 2007-07-17 ch 7,	abusehm interesting. Leda is growing on me, I like the Flack/Michael triangle, My nerves are still a bit grated from the previous revelations of Danny's relationship with Leda, I sure hope Danny and Lindsay can find some resolution without a the weirdness and akwardness of Leda seemingly in the middle. Looking forward ot the next chapter.
demolished-soul 2007-07-17 ch 7,	abuseAww, Delia sounds like a cute girl. I love that question: "Where's your prince?" Everyone is looking for their prince, the one that'll make them extrememly happy. I seriously love the way you write, it's ingenious. Can't wait for the second part! =)
sparkyCSI 2007-07-17 ch 7,	abuseAw...The prince conversation is just perfect. I feel like that sometimes!! (btw...I feel so loved right now! You're welcome for reviewing!) Wow that was a lot of medical knowledge. I loved how you made it medical but still understandable. rubbing my hands in glee I can't wait until she breaks up with Robert. I think she had already found her prince. :P
sparkyCSI 2007-07-06 ch 6,	abuseVery nicely handled! I think that Leda is just what Lindsay needs! As per you're questions...She'd better break it off with Robert or I'll send my muse after her! Yes, Lindsay will tell Danny what's wrong...It'll just take time! And Leda will call Don...he's perfect for her!! Can't wait for the next update!

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