great job on the lemon update soon

Interesting story; will yugi be making an apearance?

I love fat updates. yes i wish tea would die too, i don't HATE her but i REALLY don't like her! Aweosme chapter! i like sarahshina and i love yami's ability to control fire, it perfectly fits his persoanlity and i loved the fight scene it was very well written espeically considering battle scenes tend to be difficutly to do, though there were a few grammical erors i noticed while reading (offering critisism from one writter to another, always check your grammer but don't worry i make the same mistakes. plus you said yami had white wings when last chapter you said they were black, think, so you might wanna double check that.) yami was awesome in that fight, and mizugi's such a coward! I loved when Marik showed up and i love how noble he is. i alos like serentiy(shizuka) in this and how she's more independent than her tv counterpart thought she'sma hell of a lot more likable than tea/anzu(shutters)though i honestly never expected her to be a mind breaker but i like it its a nice twist. I can't wait for next chapter when we see marik's aryashiki powers in action, i'll bet him and yami will be one hell of a team, just wait until bakura hears about this. and poor yami he had such a ruff night. plus i loved that line "that's the last time i mix pixie sticks with coffe" or soemthing like that i was cracking up! this is an awesome story and i can't wait for the next chapter,hopefully tomorrow since you seem to update fast, but if its lonmger i'll wait, cuz this story is wicked aweosme!

OMG Yami-chan, this was absolutely fantastic!!

I love how Yami has awakened, he is so damn sexy *drools*

I also loved how Yami can use fire!! Yay fire! *plays with a grill lighter*

Where did this guy get the audacity to attack our Yami? *beats the shit out of enemy*

Marik must save Yami, he must, Marik is gonna kick ass ^_^

Yay!! Yami-chan you must update soon please? *sparkly Yugi eyes*

Oh Yami-chan, thanks for the dedication, I don't know what I would do without you, and you know I am always here for you, no matter what, I am glad you feel so much better, I am happy that you are happy ^_^

Oh, wow! YuGiOh Aquarian Age crossover! Excellent! This is good to see and I'll cwertainly keep an eye on it.

I notice you're revering the roles traditionally associated with the series/game by making females mind breakers and males faction members. That's cool, since that was the one thing I was a little unsure of in the series, because women arew so traditionally viewed as "subservient", still it would be nice to see that dealt with in a story like this, whichever way it works.

Liking the beginning a lot. Your character catagorizing is also fairly apt. I look forwards to reading on and finding out more.

wow this sounds totoally awesome! i always wondered when someone would do a story like this, ever since i reads the juvneile orion series (which s offically one of my fav manga series) and i even came up with an idea in my head, thouhg in my mind yugi's the mind breaker, yami and bakura are darklores(for all the obvious reasona, the really hot bishonen are always demons that's why i love them) and ryou's an eraser cuz it just suits him, i like the idea of joey as an aryashiki and kaiba either E.G.O or WIZ-DOM, but that's my opinion im alos liek the yoai hiakrixyami couples,since i considere kaibaxjoey an yamixhikari cuz it just fits and i love Yamixyugi, i don't care what anyone else thinks. i never really considered anzu as a mind breaker, unless of course she's evil, or bad, perosnally i don't hate her, but she's just so..ugh i don't like her, granted she's a lot more independnet and a lot less annoying in the manga as oppose to the aime where all she does is preach, cheer and get her self kidnapped, but still all she does is get herself kidnapped, capture poosesed etc, and the boys have to save her, and i HATE Yamixtea with a passion cuz let's fce it it's just NOT gonna happen...sorry about the rambling but anyway this sounds totally awesome so far and i love how the three yamis are close(those are my favorites) and how they're in characters and that they keep thier "bad-boy" appearance but are still hot and good kids, and i liked the way you introduced ryou to bakura. i also liked yami's "awakening" and i'm curious to see how yugi plays in tot his since i'm assuming the other eraser was him and i'm curious to see who sarashina is and what her conection to yami is. you have a great start and the information in the prologue was very helpful to someone unfamiliar with the series. you have a great story going on here and i can't wait to read more.

Yay, what an awesome chap yami-chan *glomps*

I love when Yami's wings emerged, painful I imagine, but he will love them in time, I also loved how Bakura saved Ryou, that was so sweet *glomps Bakura* and Ryou sounds so adorable already.

I absolutely cannot wait until you update, Yay *does happy dance for like the millionth today* ^_^

This story is already on my favs and everything, commendable job Yami-sama *bows to you*

OMG, I am so going to love every single minute of this, I just know I will. I cannot wait until Yami and Yugi are revealed, because I already know Yami will be super sexy in this, as well as a few others.

Yami-chan, this is gonna be great, you have supported me for all of my fics since the beginning, and even supporting me with fics I haven't even written yet *glomps*

This is gonna be fantastic, I cannot wait to watch this story unfold, *sits in anticipation*