Loved it!

Oh my gosh! This was... so beautiful!

Wow, it's been such a long while since I've looked at your work... T.T Beautiful. Moving. Believable... What else can I say? It's so PERFECT! :D

Wow, such a beautiful and romantic picture. It's so wonderful how you write since you make it seem so believable. I really can imagine Kyuzo doing that even though it does not really seem like him. There is definitely magic when you write, my friend. Great work as always!

NarcissisticRiceBall

That was... SEXY! i loved it! during this i was listening to "Lovers Flower Garden" from the movie House Of Flying Daggers at the same time.. and... DAMN ... the way you wrote it .. it was soo enthralling! the song was Perfect for it(usually i listen to music while i read, to enhance my imagination... although the music i listen to while i read ia alway instrumental... and it helps.. almost like a movie playing in my mind it helps me get sucked into the story.. but enough about me) ... I suggest you listen to the song while reading it! NICE JOB!

The chemistry between Kyuzo and Nasami is so captivating; one can just feel the electricity between them (and, yes, I'm finally into Sword of the Soul, btw - not enough hours in the day, dang it). The imagery in this particular piece was... beautiful. I can think of no better adjective. I'll even admit to actually getting a lump in my throat.

Well done.