Oh, I think it was very accurate! Very nice poem! :)

I liked the rhythm, especially in the first stanza. Great poem!

Really good poem!

WONDERFUL poem. I especially liked the last stanza.

Very good, and also a bit sad... I think that scene in AWE was one of the most heartbreaking scenes in the movie...

Great poem! I'm glad you wrote it! The jar of dirt definitely deserves to have a poem written about it;)

Very good poem. Disturbing... I liked it a lot.

That was amazing! Especially the ending. Truly great poem. I loved it!

Very sad... but wonderful:)

"Sailing through mists of time" - beautiful, I loved it!

AWESOME poem.

I also like that line about 'the dark side of ambition' very much! :) Very nice poem!

GREAT poem!

Very nice poem, very clever. I really liked it:)

Very good poem! :)

Brilliant!! I loved it!