OMG ITS RIKU AND SORA!! THEY DO BELONG TOGETHER!plus the show hinted at it so bad!

OMG YOU AR SO COOL OwO

GO itachi XD

OMG THIS IS ...hot o.o

That one "with light there's dark r shadow" Crap was from KH! lol love the story !! is there a second?

a... that ...was... frickin'... AWSOME! oh.**.U.i-ta-chi

Hey! ^^
Very nice, I like mpreg! Im tired and can't comment properly, but since I can review without logging in now, I decided to give a try!

Hehe.. Well I just wanted to say; congratz with the baby... wait.. That's not you.. damnit Im too tired for this -.-"

Nighty night, sleep tight!^^

wow. ur lemons were... awesome! i know, most of them were rapes, but, i have this thing were i love angst/rapes, since they're more graphic & stuff... ANYWAYS, loved ur story!

The story is good but it is badly written with a spelling or grammer mistake in almost every sentence (some sentences had both). Like this one "He is coming closer to his climate and grabs Naruto untouched **." I assume it should be climax and 's after Naruto. It's hard to keep reading really...

“This is a big reason why you never get a uke mad…they can be very scary.” omg everything was serious... but kakashi had to open his mouth wooww thats why i like him... ohh just how i love your fic it had everything i was looking for.. except that i wanted to know more about when the second baby is born you know!! you might be right since itachi it dead they will no more action and it will ruin the whole fic... also it had a great ending yeah!!

I thought this was a good story,you did a good job writing it and remember you can't please everyone all the time.

my god you have a sick mind . . .( mind if we trade brains?) i love the storie keep up the good work kay?

Oh wow~!! So intense!! I seriously thought this was going to be a ItaNaru fiction!! >_

wow very good naruto having a baby is something else keep up the good work

Nicely written; the story flowed with no breaks and was very direct. There were no missing pieces. I noticed some spelling/grammar errors, but it's the kind of stuff that even a Microsoft Word spell-check wouldn't pick up on.

Anyway. It's hard to write a decent review because I'm not that into Naruto, but I know the characters at least and I was able to follow the meaning.

As for criticism (hopefully constructive), I would say, if you're writing, don't write from point A to point B. You'll only create a direct line, and while that can accomplish the goal, it may leave you feeling like you could do better. Instead, let the words flow from your heart. Don't worry about spelling/grammar/forcing literal concepts, just worry about getting the feeling of what you're trying to convey down on paper. The hard part comes afterwards, cleaning everything up.

All in all, very good. I'm going to read more as soon as I have the time ^.^