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Reviews For: A Very Elaborate Hoax

NoNameJones
2007-04-27
ch 2, anon.
abuseWell worth it, keep going. VERY interesting. Cant wait for more!

Have a shiny day!

NNJ
Zephyr of Shadows
2007-03-23
ch 2,
abuse*blinks* HAHAHAHA evil snow indeed cap'n, this is very VERY exceptionally well written, you'd do Joss proud you would =) please keep this story rolling, I find that you capture their "voices" as it were incredibly well =)
Laby Anne Boleyn
2007-03-23
ch 2,
abusegreat chapter... burning snow...:)
Zephyr of Shadows
2007-03-21
ch 1,
abuse*blinks* wow, spoky... your channeling Joss friend, and its a little creapifying =P Keep it up, but one suggestion, they DO say ** in Firefly, but it's in mandarin, so if you really wanna say some bad cuss words, start looking for a chinese to english dictionary, and placing translations at the bottom =D ** by the way, is go se (literally meaning dog **, or just plain **) son of a ** is used, gorram for goddamn, ruttin' for **, and yes, I'm more'n like to get into trouble for teachin ya how to swear 'verse style, but I don't give a good gorram =D
Laby Anne Boleyn
2007-03-20
ch 1,
abuseHa, Ha,Ha very fuuny.
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