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| NoNameJones 2007-04-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseWell worth it, keep going. VERY interesting. Cant wait for more! Have a shiny day! NNJ |
| Zephyr of Shadows 2007-03-23 ch 2, | abuse*blinks* HAHAHAHA evil snow indeed cap'n, this is very VERY exceptionally well written, you'd do Joss proud you would =) please keep this story rolling, I find that you capture their "voices" as it were incredibly well =) |
| Laby Anne Boleyn 2007-03-23 ch 2, | abusegreat chapter... burning snow...:) |
| Zephyr of Shadows 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuse*blinks* wow, spoky... your channeling Joss friend, and its a little creapifying =P Keep it up, but one suggestion, they DO say ** in Firefly, but it's in mandarin, so if you really wanna say some bad cuss words, start looking for a chinese to english dictionary, and placing translations at the bottom =D ** by the way, is go se (literally meaning dog **, or just plain **) son of a ** is used, gorram for goddamn, ruttin' for **, and yes, I'm more'n like to get into trouble for teachin ya how to swear 'verse style, but I don't give a good gorram =D |
| Laby Anne Boleyn 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abuseHa, Ha,Ha very fuuny. |