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T
2008-05-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseI just found this - it's brilliant! Amazing plot, and so well written! Thanks!
Alcina vom Steinsberg
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseWhat a sweet, lovely tale about a fascinating friendship and the opportunity to make a new start! Of course, how very careless of Minerva, doing this kind of tampering. But even the most commonsense people do do foolish thing now and then...
Chemistress
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseThis was such fun!! What an original idea, and the surprise ending! Great job!
theKRITIC
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseAMAZING. And heartwarming. And fuzzy. I love the gradual transformations.
Mariel Nightstalker
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseI loved this! As a Sev/Min fan, I found this quite a new take on the whole 'relationship while they were younger' aspect of it.

I listened to Angels and Airwaves' song 'Heaven' while reading, and I think the lyrics fit.

keep up the good work!

Mara
Maran Zelde
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseWow. Original, sweet, and cute without sinking into sapville. It gives me another reason to wish JKR hadn't killed off Severus. But never mind that.

I especially love the game of hide-and-seek. "He'd show her who was crap at hiding." Hehe.

Come to think of it, the basic premise of this fic would make a pretty standard Disney family comedy. Thankfully your fic is a lot more intelligent and doesn't have any fart jokes.
Kurissyma san Tybalt
2007-12-14
ch 1,
abuseAww!! That's so cute!! Chibi Minnie and Sevvy!!

Riri
I'm Just Drawn That Way
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely, completely, and without reservation, LOVE this story. I'm now adding you to my fave authors - after reading two of your creations, I know I'll want to read more.
Owl Emporium
2007-12-02
ch 1,
abuseMajor kudos! I loved this! It was so sweet at the end. Loved it! :]
Dyslexic Crayon
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseOh, I just loved this story. Bravo!
Leta McGotor
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseHi,
that was great, really. It made me laugh, and at some points - it made me think, too. I liked this story very much. It's nothing, I believe, that has been there before. Great work.
killertrees
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseWonderful!
sisterthemoon
2007-08-14
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is absolutely fantastic. Very well done, an engaging, well-paced story, and all kinds of touching, especially at the end.

Love!
bemeka
2007-07-27
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed that. Good story.
Blatant Discontent
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abuseWow!! I think I love you. I'm going to go back and read all your stories. The marvelous thing is that you manage to write really engaging stories that have morals that aren't rubbed in peoples' faces. :) This one's really special.
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