 Wispr 2008-05-06 . chapter 1That was really good, there were parts in it that actually made me laugh out loud, good work!
Wispr |
 Ronin Drake 2007-03-22 . chapter 1Very good story. I like how it played out. I caught on to it pretty early, so I'm very proud of myself.
I do have one question though... Do you really think Richard Karn is still going to be doing Family Feud in 10 years? I know the name was used for us to get the reference right away, but that was my first thought when I read it.
Really enjoy your work. Keep 'em coming. |
 natdrat00 2007-03-21 . chapter 1That was quite good really. Although the final question was... odd, I look forward to more of you work. |
 creativetoo 2007-03-21 . chapter 1Wow. It took me, maybe a little longer, than some, to guess at what was going on but when I did finally realize it...it was like the proverbial light bulb going off. :)
Terrific idea and fantastically written.
Damn...I love these one shots you come up with. I hope those plot bunnies keep bothering you over and over and over again if this is what we get as a result. :) |
 King in Yellow 2007-03-21 . chapter 1Hm... I suspected what was going on fairly early. That might because a week or so ago I mentioned some stories I was thinking about in my profile which included: "A Mile in Her Shoes" [I'm cutting out the description from my profile since it would spoil this story if you are reading reviews before the story.]
Not saying this is borrowed, more likely great minds running in the same channels. Not sure if I'll ever get to mine now. This was very well done.
A few places where the proofing could have been a little tighter, but a fun with a lot of good bits in it.
KiY |
 Invader Johnny 2007-03-21 . chapter 1Add evil smirk here.
This was a rather interesting take you wrote here, it could haveen better like adding a scene of Shego and Kim freaking out once they switched, that would have been fun to read.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 mouserr2255 2007-03-21 . chapter 1that was friggin awesome ... for a bit there i was wondering but in the end the explanations laid it all out nicely and there is definitely an interesting kink to it ... cant wait for the next
=^.^= |
 A Markov 2007-03-20 . chapter 1I was really freaking out in the middle, I thought that Shego had been exposed to Havoc. I was going to have to hunt you down and kill you. But when they started fighting at the abandoned mall it all snapped into place.
As usual, your characterization is spot on and your narrative flows well. You make it seem so effortless and smooth.
Alex |