I just found your story. I'm enjoying it very much. Thank you for sharing it!

There is some very powerful writing in this latest story - and it is so well done. How you have taken the day at the bank, deftly woven it into the continued plotline here, revealed the real circumstances to the rest of the Squad - brilliant!

But is this really it? Because it does leave one wanting more!

There is some very powerful writing in this latest story - and it is so well done. How you have taken the day at the bank, deftly woven it into the continued plotline here, revealed the real circumstances to the rest of the Squad - brilliant!

But is this really it? Because it does leave one wanting more!

I'm with M5C on this. I like the way it's going but I don't think it feels as though this point is the finish point. I also think the character of JD has had to become more cerebral and less physical so I'm not sure this is what he would do - although to be fair you would be pretty mad if you came face to face with the guy who had wrecked your life! Still liked it though!

Terrific--wonderfully tense scene--interesting parallels you drew when they were all in the back of the van--nice to see JD lose it for once--he's usually so controlled--nice to see him with a bit of emotion in this fic--great writing.

Now THAT was an interesting way to end the chapter!

This is not over... this can't be over. No matter what the dirt bag did Jim's assault on the man's eyes was inexcusable. I can hear Fisk reorimanding and Tunny threatening when this incident get made public and I don't see how it can't be made public.

Wow... as much as I love this story, I can nnot wait for the next one... I hope you will be finishing what has happened here.

Mom

Wonderfully written--the scene between Christie and J was very moving--almost had me misting over!! I liked that you included her point of view in that segment--it really lent a depth of emotion to the scene.

As usual--also a terrific, bendy, twisty plot!

Looking forward to the rest!

o--Heisey!

As always, this is outstanding--so much plot, so tightly woven--and what a terrific, unexpected twist!

I can't wait to read more--thanks for writing!

This is a pretty interesting plot line. I'm anxious to see where you go from here.

Really like where this is going! Please please carry on. I'm coming to this FanFic site a bit late and have been reading stuff posted in 2005 and some isn't finished! I don't think I can take another one that doesn't end!

Seriously I've been so entertained reading this stuff! Kudos to you all.

Oh, this was hard to read. NOT because of the style, but because I can feel the anguish going through our hero. And the reactions of his fellow officers are just as gut wrenching, it is as if Jim has been exposed in a way he never wanted or needed.

This is a very powerful piece of writing.

Mom

I'm hooked too so please keep going!

Heisey, it is always a treat to see another one of your great stories. I like how you can keep the tension up at the Dunbars and still have Jim be a competent officer in the NYPD.

I am looking forward to many more chapters

Wow... so I've taken the bait - now reel me in! This looks like a tasty one!