i sooo hate elise she kissed sonic and when she did i was like nooooo amy should of gave sonic the kiss of life not her amy must feel regected (sorry for my bad spelling im only in year 6)

Your style of writting is easy to follow, and wonderful to read. I just wish you would work on your spelling a little, and use other superlatives than just "said".
Example: "balh," Maria sighed/ "blah," Shadow growled/ "blah," Cream squeaked...
You get the picture. I hope this was enough to help you with future writing,or to help you make what you've already written even better than it already is.

i loved all the chapters i can't wait 2 c the rest there is going 2 b more isn't there?

will there be more chapters?

Well, ive been waiting for Years and years
I wish I can read more of these
Its really Romantic,Comedy, and kinda Cute Please Make more of this pLEAsssssseEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Uh, any luck fixing your computer yet? It has been over 2 years

hmm... a bit sad ...

plz i am a big big fan and i wish you would finish.

Isn't it frustrating when you can't do one thing without the other, and you can't do the other without the first? I believe it's called a 'Catch 22.'

plz fhinsh the story

Good story

when are you gonna upload it? Its started to get really good but it ended :(

This is probably one of the most popular stories on fanfiction... but you havent updated in a year and a half... Aren't you going to tell us if you've stopped doing stories or are you just going to forget about it? not a flame just wondering is all...

I'ts soooooo cute but some of the words are a little missed spelled. When are u going to make the other chapters I've read this story 6 times already!

Great but please spell stuff right