aw! i think you should continue this!

Amazing, insightful, and very in-character.

You definitely captured Nawat's voice, and I can imagine his thoughts to be like this. He's a very lovable character, and, you're right, there needs to be more Nawat fics out there :)

Awesome job.

wow, this is awesome. put another chapter up?? please?

Please a new chapter.

Please do a new chapter!

very well written and in character! Unique topic too.

I love the depth and understanding you gog through in your fanfictions to get your point across. The thoughts of Nawat as a crow an human thinkning about ALy and life are just amazing.

Aw I love it! I've always wondered about that part, and you wrote it so perfectly!

that was really good :)

I love this, it's beautiful! Nawat is one of my faves. Keep it up!

I've always loved Nawat. This story fits him perfectly. Great Job.

that was really interesting, I liked having Nawat's POV. Good job bud!

This is really nice. I'm sorry if it seems kind of condescending, but it is. That's the only way to describe it. It doesn't need big, crashy events to make it good, it's just nice.

Great story. I love Nawat, he's so adorable. Great writing.

Wow. Fantastic. That was so unbelievably Nawat...I never realized he must have had to go through so many emotional conflicts to become a man; kuddos to you that you did and presented it that clearly. Your writing is truly inspiratonal and I enjoyed the plot. I would definitely keep on reading it if you added more to this.