As I told you on Deviant Art, this is a very cool story, just needs a little beta work. Will get it done quickly for you. Expect it back within a day or two (all four chapters)...promise. Can't wait to see next chapter.

This is really really good! Please write more!

Hello...please continue...its amazing so far...idk what else to say other than keep up the wonderful work and i look forward to reading some more...have a nice day ^-^

i cant wait to see what happens next. the whole Bob and Harry relationship i like in this story.