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PhantomPersona
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
Very entertaining.
GoldenAmber
2009-09-26 . chapter 12
A very beautiful collection of stories..=)
ByaRetsu is my favourite pairing in Bleach and I really love how you describe their relationship and interaction in your writing.. Thank you for these very lovely and enjoyable stories.. Wish u can update soon..^^
gailzer
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
what a lovely story
gailzer
2009-06-11 . chapter 12
this is such a nice story i love it
Shezz
2009-01-04 . chapter 12
Interesting take on the theme I can imagine why it wasn't easy to write, but you did it well because Bya's decision making in the chapter represents a 'Fence' an obstacle that he has to cross. I loved the already established relationship with Bya/uno the exact touch the chapter needed a little fluff, the themes are about them lol. Keep the chappies comin peace out ^_^ laterz!
yume girl 91
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Sweet!
Shezz
2008-10-28 . chapter 11
Hi! loved the chapter was very funny i guess bya & uno are just kinky lol I thought that maybe rukia had cuffed them together, but it seems they did it themsleves lol. Update soon, hope u alrite talke to ya later.
SuperSandra
2008-09-06 . chapter 11
Aww, I liked it. Hehe, Byakuya and Retsu sleeping together because of their drunkenness. Byakushi just put your arm around her already, damn!

Thank you for the PM. I am so in love with this pairing at the moment that it is a shame that there isn't many fics about them. I have to leave it up to my imagination to figure out how they'd look together. I have something in the works about them too but I'm not sure how well it'll go. :/

Anyway, another plus is the IchiRuki bit at the end. I'm a sucker for anything IchiRuki so that's always a plus.

Hope you update soon! ;D
IVIaedhros
2008-09-04 . chapter 11
This just didn't seem to jive with me...I don't know...still, the idea of Soifon getting together with Jyuushiro is a very interesting one.
HimeHeenim
2008-09-04 . chapter 11
Love this chapter! this really made my day~
SuperSandra
2008-09-01 . chapter 10
Aw, thanks to you I'm such a Byakuya/Unohana shipper. There are some spelling mistakes here and there but that's fine as long as everything is understandable. I like your approach on their relationship because if something did ever happen between those two, how you've written it is how I would imagine it happening. Not rushed I guess you can say.

I've enjoyed each chapter thus far and none of them have been bad in my opinion. I hope you continue with more soon! =]
Shezz
2008-06-10 . chapter 10
Uh huh you no dat aint your best piece -_- cos i was reading it and thinking "she didnt enjoy writing this chapter." The funniest part for me though was "he had to admit that she was rather eye pleasing despite the odd front-under-the-chin hairstyle, but it was something that he could cope with." hahahaha lol. Ah...might have revised it? no comment, but isnt that bakageta's job? Anyways seeing as you know it wasnt your best i think we can let it slide ^_~ and say it was because you were writing about Hisana and that dampened your inspiration lol. Oh yeah and Uni being a pain i'll have to have a word with your course tutors. All the best for the next one i pray you have no exams and less Uni work! talk to ya soon laterz!
Ps.
You're a great writer ^_~!
Shezz
2008-05-10 . chapter 9
Hey, hey nice chapter byakuya whispering in unohana's ear very nice touch, its like he's teasing her lol sweet. The chapter reminded me of the song i sent to you 'I dont wanna wait' fits perfectly. I understand the concept with him speakin to his sword seen it with ichigo too nice idea. Anyways hope u alrite cant wait to read more and talk to ya soon laterz ^_^!
windam2611
2008-04-26 . chapter 9
so cute...

nice one...
update soon...
IVIaedhros
2008-04-25 . chapter 9
Enjoyed the update.
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