Really enjoyed this one, liked the interaction with Ronon and John especially, nice to see Atlantis connect with John.

Nice story.

Lovely, I like this. Thanks.

Ah, I just found this little gem this evening and enjoyed it a great deal. Cool stuff with Atlantis and the dilemma Shep was in. Thanks for sharing!

hey. great story, well written, good character detail very interesting and the ending made me smile :) more john and ronon please...

good story Loved it!
I love Atlantis-sheppard stories
great work!

This whole story has been so interesting. I love the concept of a rogue program that Sheppard needs to defeat using his connection to Atlantis. I wish the show would make better use of his gene. It started out being a big deal then pft, nothing.

Thanks for the creative story!

A crazy AI. Nice. I enjoyed it.

Fun, exciting story!
Loved every chapter.

But I don't want this to be finished :(. I want to see more about John and his new, deeper connection with Atlantis and how jealous Rodney's likely to get ::stamps foot petulently::

I loved how John took on Roarke together with Atlantis and that the connection was still there when he woke up. Some great moments of banter, and concern hidden under banter, too.

So glad you came back to finish this cool story! Oh how I love the ShepLantis! In your version, the connection went quite deep. Awesome fic!

Is this story really over? It's so great I don't want it to end. Any chance of another story exploring the consequences of John “becoming one with Atlantis”? Fantastic story!

A wonderful conclusion, really tense and exciting, and woo hoo! Infirmary scene! Hee hee! You're a star! :)

Loved it. John connecting with Atlantis in order to communicate with the others and to defeat the Game Keeper was awesome. Ronon was great taking charge and trying to lead the others out. Very, very cool story!!

sheppard deffinantly put up a heck of a fight against the gamekeeper its a good thing atlantis didnt like the game :)

I really enjoyed this story very much.