Hmm, not entirely canon. Vegeta didn't just train at Capsule Corp, he lived there too. Also, nobody outside Bulma, Vegeta, Bulma's parents and Goku and Piccolo knew about Trunks before the Androids' arrival. The latter two only because they heard it from future Trunks himself. And if you thought Vegeta's reaction to Trunks' death was a great moment, I highly recommend the Buu saga. Vegeta really comes full circle and shows just how much Bulma and Trunks mean to him by making the ultimate sacrifice for their sake.

Cute._

*throws a tomatoe at you* boy did that fic suck ass...-_-

ehhhh...

I love this story!

gotta love the fics that portray vegeta as trying to be fatherly.

That was kawaii! :)

Sweet

That was really really really good!

I liked it. Way more real then some of the other ones I've read.

ah,thanks for the reviews. i will look into the buu saga then. maybe i'll be lucky and it'll be on toonami next... i must admit, i think vegeta's relationship with bulma is facinating, most normal girls would leave him in a hurry, but she sees something in him. :)

cute story! As far as vejiita showing love for his family, he does show it again in the future sagas. My favorite in particular is when he got mad a goku for offering nude pictures of bulma to Daikaioshin in exchange for the use of the namekian dragonballs and vejiita told him how dare he offer pictures of his wife and to instead give daikaoishin pictures of chichi's tits!

It was good! I think most b/v fics are okay, but I mean some of them put Vegeta really out of character. Sad. Lol I like this one, it was an interesting change. lol. good job! Kira

I guess not since you've never seen the Buu saga when Vegeta sacrifices himself for his family.

This DOES sound like something that would happen. Great job! :)