good interlude

So...want me to cut down another forest for you? Because you must be running low on SAP by now. heh, get it? Sap? Sappy romance? Ah, I kill me. Great writing, didn't really get the foreshadowy part though, grammar kind of spoiled it. I suggest a rewrite of that portion...and a wee bit less sap. Trees are hard enough to preserve as it is.

This is great!

I recently went to a Cosplay party and someone told me to go as Motoko. It's great seeing the characters in action.

I recently took up kendo and iaido and am kicking serious butt.

:)

I hope this review finds you well.

Having read and loved Immortality Sucks (and NNWTIQ) I an overjoyed to see the sequel being released. I cannot wait to read more!

:O...another immortality sucks...words dont say how syked I am! the first one had me enthraled like only one other story on this site. I only wish i could watch all the other animes mentioned in the fic so i could understand the story better.

Great stuff! I was a bit worried when you seemed to go off the radar for a while but here you are; smiting us with another bolt of... really... good chapter... thingy.

Can't wait to see more!!

Having read the story "Immortality Sucks" and loving it, I was pleasantly surprised to see this interlude containing the same fun and humor that the main story did.

However, I was not pleased the the "Elsewhere" bit with Drake. While it was fine that you managed to get him to ressurrect himself at the end of the main story, it was the appearance of Ranma and Nabiki that doesn't sit well with me. The way it is done just doesn't seem to fit in with the continuity of the main body of the interlude very well and quite possibly could've done with a little more explanation in places.

On the whole, it's made me look forward to a sequel that should be of the same great calibur that I have seen so far. What does the future hold for Keitaro and Motoko? An exciting one from what I can surmise. And that in itself is worth waiting for.

And people took me to task over MY cliffhangers?
Once again you have produced an excelent chapter, neatly rounding off 'Immortality sucks' and 'Never Negotiate with the Ice Queen' with weddings and an action-packed snapshot of the honeymoon. Genma's and Soun's inability to find an easy path through their 'retirement' years continues to amuse, while dark clouds still seem to follow Akane's ultimate destiny.
While I am sure that the newlyweds are in for a rough time in the future, you truely have assembled three perfectly balanced marriages capable of dealing with most of the threats you will see fit to throw at them. I say most because, damnit, where's the fun in KNOWING it's all going to turn out fine. I want twists and turns and red-herrings!
I am awaiting with keen interest for your next epic. T

Whoa, talk about a teaser with that last part, Evil Ranma and Nabiki(do either of them have goatee's?)LOL, though the honeymoon to the beach was fun for the most part, even with the trhee stooges trying to disrupt it, and was glad to see that they got what was coming to them, though I do wonder about Akane, she still seems to have quite a bit of anger, and jealousy for Ranma it seems, and I wonder if that'll play out harder in the future.

Great story. And you hooked me with the end. Well done.

Cool, First Review! Ok, wow, i got kind of lost in the end. I am glad that the story isn't over, but your timing placement confused me. I thought that NNWTIQ occured at the same time as Immortality Sucks? But it was definitly funny. I always wondered why Drake never tried to "negotiate" with Ranma like he did with Keitaro, ya know with the whole 'neutral territory' thing and the showing half truths. But i am still kind of in the dark. Good Story! Cant wait for the next one!
Good Luck ^_^