More than awesome^^
Lovely read, I enjoyed very, very much!

I really hope you haven't lost interest in this story. I'm really enjoying it.

I have to say, when I started this story, I didn't like the idea...then I realized she'd been kidnapped, and suddenly I loved it! I just read the whole thing, and I hate how nobody ever trusts Raven, just once I want her to be instantly accepted, judt once. When Robin realized he was wrong, I was so happy, I just don't like Robin, he was in enough TV shows before Teen Titans, and I guess I just didn't think he needed more, and he thinks he all knowing and it just annoys me. I just want to go up to him and knock some sence into him. I hope you update soon, can't wait for the action!

-Martiny

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Interesting,but i don't see where is this stroy heading to!PLS continue this as soon as you can!

I can't wait for the next part of this wonderful story.

Nice. I had wondered why all of Raven's emotions were so messed up, and this explains things much better than any of the ideas I could come up with.
I really like the way that you've developed the police in this story. They're real people without losing the hard edge that makes them The Law. The issue of how the law deals with supers is something I've been curious about watching the show. The heroes never seem to have trouble with the law for the gratuitous property damage and with the way Raven throws cars at people you'd think that someone would get angry about it.
One thing that's a bit difficult to understand is the way that Beast thinks of BB. Is he pack in Beast's mind or more like Raven's emotions, which are part of her but which she doesn't seem to care that much about as people as far as I could tell from the show. You've developed them further than the source material did, and it can get a little confusing.
One last thing. I think you got things backward in one place. You said: 'for these five cases, she showed up when the fight was nearly over. When they fought Mad Mod, she was there from the beginning.' But we 'saw' her interference in the fight with Mad Mod, and she wasn't there from the beginning. Does this mean that Carmen called her in even later on the other cases or what?
I really enjoyed this story so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapter whenever it comes out.

I read some of this story a while back and decided earlier that I wanted to catch up on it. Spent a good 20 minutes trying to find it.

Anyway, I really like this. ^^

MORE! LOVES IT!!

Incredible. Your work is art. I reached that conclusion after reading the fifth chapter of "Dance of the Skeletons". The thought out, grammatically correct, addicting, and well written spirit of your fiction possessed me to read "Dance of the Skeletons", "Raven and the Beast", "Red", "Jade", "Never", "Emotions", and "The Fifth" consecutively in the past 72 hours. I am amazed at the planing and talent that goes into your work. I am eagerly awaiting your next update, but until then I believe that I am in dire need of some rest.

Well dang...there's no more to read. *sigh*
I really hope you update soon, I'd hate to see this story go unfinished. Then again, you did finish a 64 chapter, 300,0 word plus story AND manage to keep me interested in it until the very end. I even favorited it. Why should I doubt that you'll finish this (I'm assuming) shorter story?
I'm also assuming that when this story is finished I'll favorite it too. But not before it's finished. I'm already going against my policy of not reading stories until they're finished because of you, but I've enjoyed all your other stories that you have finished, so I'm putting my faith in you. Red, Jade, and Raven and the Beast were all very good. I'd read Rookie, but it's not done...yet, I hope.
Well, I really have nothing more to say other than great story, update soon. I think this is the longest review I've ever left for anyone.

The Rising Tide

WOW!!

Okay..I had to reread it sure...but it was well worth it let me tell you. I'd forgotten just how good this story was. And your writing! You are superb at the subtle, yet sarcastic humor Raven uses, and you're amazing when it comes to writing out her emotion-selves. That plot twist, with the emotions getting mixed up slightly to keep Raven alive when Trigon left her to defend herself...absolutely perfect. Rage makes such a nice Anger thought...I shall miss that. Now to wonder if Prudence will get to become Wisdom again. And it's interesting that a small bit of anger, plus Obnoxiousness could equal Pride...it makes sense in an odd way...but it's still interesting. It's nice to see Intellect as Curiosity again though.. Intellect was too ~ huffy..full of herself... Bleh... She was a pain for the others. XI

Anyways...there's my rant/review. X3 I do hope you have time and inspiration enough to update this again soon! X3 Hopefully sooner than before! XD

Still loving it, even with the...break...from writing. ^w^
~Zi

OMG. This is a great series. Please update soon!

i love this story!! its very well written..

great story so far.
It's nice to see you finally updating again.
Just one question why is Raven speaking Russian?
and her magic words meant "eigth demonic hell" why?

You are an amazing writer.

The first story I ever read from you was "Dance of The Skeletons" and that was beautiful all by itself. I was shocked, to say the least, when I saw that the narrative was longer than 50 chapters.

It took awhile to read, but I was quite pleased with the outcome.

Now with this story, I'm aching to see the next chapter, or even the end of the story. I'm so engrossed into the plot, that I think I'll be thinking about what'll happen next when I go to bed tonight.

I love the personality you gave the characters. Dead on and perfect.

Starfire is as she should be. Happy, but not bubbly. Confused, but not stupid. Wise, caring, just overall a very soothing being to be around with. You've made her seem like she knows what she's doing, unlike other writers who just make her look and feel stupid because she's an alien. She does have some common sense too, and I'm pleased that someone other than me has noticed it.

Cyborg was officially in perfect personality. He's quiet when he needs to be, listens when he has to, understands things more clearly than most, and is the "big brother" to the Titans. You gave him a playful manner and is a very thoughful metahuman.

A lot of writers make him sound like a gangster with the way they make him talk. With the: "Whazup?", or "Yo...". It irritates me sometimes, but most of the time the writer is giving the character his playful streak, and I appreciate that they're trying somewhat to recreate his personality from the anime.

Robin is complicated, with or without Batman. He can be very engrossed in his work and is very short when it comes to an important, or personal, subject.

Many, many, many writers see his cold demeanor as his original personality, but they also forget that he was raised with the Dark Knight. He was trained to sheild his emotions as if they didn't matter. You've done an exceptional job portraying this.

Raven, I must say, is my favorite character in your story (or just about any story, in fact). She's very mysterious and fragile, yet strong and painstakingly obvious it hurts. It's a fact that she hasn't had a nice childhood, and it's clear that she's afraid of her emotions. In the beginning of your story, you made her unwilling to help, cold, and careful with the people she was with.

Now at the end of the story, she's taking second thoughts as to whether she should say no to Starfire when she asks her to go to the mall. Very wonderful indeed. Another extremely significant detail with Raven that most people forget, is that her cold exterior is a self defense against those not-so-safe emotions.

Beast Boy is very unique. The fact that he's struggling against something that's not his fault is genius. I've read a lot of stories where the writer makes Beast angry and dangerous at first word. But you've somehow managed to swerve around that and created this whole new being which is most intriguing. He's very careful with who he wants to be with, and after the Terra incident, I'm guessing you want him to be more careful with the people he grows attached with.

Another thing that I adore about this narrative. You've given the Titans their normal, peaceful lives without the exception of Raven in the middle of it. You've recreated every significant event that's happened and just curved around Raven. It's extremely unique, and the thoughts and inspirations that go around in your mind are... well... odd. But in a good way!

You can start heading in one direction with your story, then completely stun your reader into making them scroll back up the page and reread what the think they just read. You have an amazing talent, and I await the next update.

I won't pressure you into updating with the: "PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!" or the occasional: "I will kill you with a chainsaw if you don't update."

The last ones creep me out a little bit, but I'm just going to say that I await your next update.

-Gun toten Girly