> She honed in on the robot

The expression is "home in on".

Very nicely done, I think you pulled it off very well.

I thought it was done quite well. And with the picture of Shego's, often the simplest of objects that are personal to someone, can be items that are hidden away, more due to a fear of having the feelings attached to the object be trampled on either by it being laughed at or scorned in some way. But it certainly was interesting. But I'm wondering if Kim and Shego will forget about the fact that Kim hadn't heard Shego sing that song before. And I'd expect that they'd both forget about it for the most part, at least until something reminds Kim about that time, which she'd probably bring it up again. Anyway, thanks for posting that!

It's very well done, don't worry about it.

You did it justice and then some. Keep up the great work in which-ever verse you choose.

Ah, it was an ok mother-daughter fic, um and I wonder what is the story behind Shego's photo?

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Cute... but then sad.

Yeah, I noticed taht one character was from the original Sailor Moon and the other was from the dubbed Sailor Moon. Though, anyway, I thought that was quite interesting. And I was amused at the bits between Asuka and Shin. Although, I was hoping for a bit more between them. It certainly would have made it more amusing. But anyway, overall I thought it was quite good. Thanks for posting that!

Well you don't really need to guess since you named the other anime characters out right. Asuka from Evangelion and of course Makoto Kino (and Ami Mizuno)from Sailor Moon. Even though it was quite depressing that you used the american dubbed name for Makoto. Boy was that depressing. Oh well. Nice chapter otherwise.

As I said over chat, I wasn't quite sure what to make of this one. Girl rivalry must be a tricky thing for a guy to write. I've never been in the girls' shower, so I guess I'd need you womenfolk to verify if girls really behave like that, i.e., compare sizes in the shower. ; ) Heck, even as a guy I'd be mightily disturbed if another guy tried something like that... How much money can you get from an indecent exposure lawsuit?

Nice to see Shin again and learn a bit more about her life and the people in it. Great work.

Well, well, well Shin had her moment of glory... yet again I pressume, guess in a way she had her rival to thank for that, heh.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Very nice. Always a pleaser to to see Shin agian.

Wow, those two bring me back. I remember I used to be such a huge fan of Sailor Moon back in the day! It was really my first fandom. <3

Alwasy love the Mi universe. A few spelling nits, but nothing derailing...

Sailors Mercury and Jupiter eh?