It was really well written and interesting but what the hell happenedd at the end?

WOOT! MORE! *Holds up plate* THANK YOU!

You know, the other reviews think this should be a chaptered story, but I think it's fine to leave it as is. Very nice.

wow. I liked. The end though, made me litterally catch my breath. Is this a cliff hanger? What happend? It's sounds good, but is it? Does she like him now? Does he like himself and get the girl? AH! lol
Otherwise, its wonderfully written, i could picture Gai-Sensei's little pep talk and nice guy pose perfectly! How Youthful! =] tehe.

Too adorable. Actually its the first well written fic ive seen in a while. Very impressive. This is a chap fic though right? Your not just gonna leave it hanging are you. Update soon!