*grins* That was so cute!

i love this song and listen to it all the time... i even have it on my Mp3 player!:) I smiled the whole time i read this story! i never thought about it with the boys but it was perfect! i could TOTALLY see that happening... especially with Joe!Great story, keep up the great work!

Another fantastic story. :D

*squeals* Song Story AWESOME!

I love them both so much!

Wow that was great.

Very nice. I like stories about the boys when they were young.

Thanks, Beth Palladino

I've always thought that was the sweetest song and you've written a very sweet story to go with it! Nice job! :)

Ah that was beautiful, I love that song, and oh they were so cute! And since its a one shot I can't ask if there's more, he he, but it was real written, and I'm going to save it in my favorites. :)

I loved it so much, it was so cool. And it was also really sweet, too, and it's realy awesome. I think maybe sometime you should write another story like that. Well...bye!

There should be a category called Introspection ...

That was so cute! I had to laugh at Joey for saying cooties alot. That's just like most boys. You captured them perfectly and it was no parody. IT was true to life. Literally. Great story. That was a wonderful piece of work.

Aww, that was so cute!

why did you categorize this a Parody? It's hardly a parody!

This is sweet... so Frank and Joe grew up idolizing their father.. at the ages of 5 and 4! And yeah, very thought-provoking too.. makes us realize that we should watch our walk and talk around kids! Hmm.. i had better stop swearing so much before i hv kids of my own.. ha!

It's a good oneshot.. very nice and sweet.. :)