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| PurplePopple 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI read this before and I reread it today. I really enjoyed it both times. I love how you seem to capture Sara's insecurities and Grissom's thoughtless comments. I love you showed the relationship progressing. It all felt very in character and natural for me. These are two people with foibles and problems. They're no one's ideal but their problems aren't overly dramatic and over blown as to make them into simpering fools. You have a nice balance. Realy enjoyed it. |
| Elizabeth Clark 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI absloutly love it! You catch how I would see Grissom's character so well! I find a lot of people have trouble catching his personality correctly. I mean, it's like 'Would he do this?' or 'Would he do it this way?'It's hard and I give credit to everyone who tries, but you scuceeded! I would so give you a cookie if there was a way to beam it to you! |
| Abby Lockhart 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseI want more! An amusing and tragic look into what Sara must have been feeling. Great fic! |
| mossley 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was just beautifully done. |
| Quill-32 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI think this is one of the best LLV-related fics I've read. Fascinating theories about Sara's state of mind and habits of thinking, and I can very much see Grissom being that tactile. Gorgeous! |
| Amanda Hawthorn 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abusethis is one of the most beautiful pieces of work I've ever read. Undoubtedly the best sabbatical fic out there,just beautiful |
| Indie 2007-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW! That was so damn sweet. Loved it. Totally in character, too. Loved the line about that familiar look leading to her being horizontal. Oh, I also loved how you made them like a real couple, unlike other fics where they're having unbelievable mind blowing sex all the time. I feel like this is closer to how it all would've actually gone down had we the privilege of seeing the whole "Grissom and Sara show". Great job! |
| Lavendar 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseNOO! Not Grease 2! Anything but that! I guess you're excused though because I really enjoyed reading this. I'm new to reading CSI fanfiction and I've had a difficult time finding any that are well written and in character. So thanks for this! I hope to enjoy more of your stories :) And Spring Awakening laundry detergent? Nice name :P |
| CSI Salyards 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI always love your stories and once again, you write brilliantly. Absolutely NOBODY holds a candle to you when it comes to how well you write the characters. Heck you write the characters better than the writers on the show! Keep up the great work... I will always read your stories so long as I have my eyeballs! |
| bellabug 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseDon't let this be the end! Please, a sequel, or a second chapter, or something. I love the way you work the characters. I need more! lol. Rach. |
| Elialys 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuse*scream of deep DEEP ANGST mixed with sudden fluffiness* My goodness, you are so AWESOME at it. How...How do you do that?? Make my stomach hurt, my heart ache, my eyes terribly tearful, my cheeks wet and painful (because I bit hard the inside of them) during the whole story, and then blow it all away with a single little tiny sentence? I know you surely already have a lot of proposition, but I want to have your babies. It was amazing. I'm nearly speechless. Nearly, because I really feel the need to let out this huge scream of angst/sudden fluffiness, but it's past 1 am here, I don't think my family would appreciate ^_^' Geez. As always, it's extraordinarily in character, everything feels so right, so good, so them, and you entered Sara's mind so perfectly...*sigh* Bouhou now I just feel like crying again, I soo adore your angst stories, they are so good for the angst-junkies like me. Deeply heartbreaking, and yet, you always, ALWAYS give us a great breath of hope at the end of it, and it makes it gorgeous. I love it all. Every sentence of it. Wonderfully excellent. I fav it immediately, and I'm going to wait impatiently for you to break/unbreak my heart again. But for now, I'm just going to go to bed, and depressed with my music (yes, I could chose the hope part of the story, but I feel like depressing right now LOL!). I'm rambling, I'm so sorry lol, I'm going to shut up know :# Thank you SO MUCH for writing this!! *heart* *Elialys* |
| Meganp 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseOh noo!! Please don't stop! This is beautiful!! It's that kind of story you get wrapped into, u know?? Ae you going to do a sequel?? Please consider it! |
| amisha.pineapple 2007-03-24 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutley wonderful. Angst with a bit of cuteness mixed in. I couldn't stop reading. |
| leafsgirl 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseooh the angst. how i love it so. that was awesome! so in character. sara and her fears, grissom and his grissomness. oh that was great. the angst hit the right spot. |
| anneruhland 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story alot. I think it show Sara's inner fears so well. It also show how clueless Gris can be at times. thanks for writing, anne |