Well, it took me 3 days of hard (school interrupted) work, but I managed to read all your stories :P And I've gotta say, good job! You did a good mix on the romantic and humorous elements, and made the story followable by someone who hasn't played the game (AKA Me). Keep it up ^_^

Glad to see the update! Really liked the reactions after the haven, that was plot gold completely dropped in the game...

I hope you resume the story sometime. I feel you've kind of written yourself into a corner with a couple plot elements. I wonder if that's why the last few sections seemed to have block issues...

I like your humor. But I do kind of wish you hadn't added another party of characters to the mix. There's still so much than can be done with existing ones, its diluting the characterizations.

I had started reading late last year when I found the fanfic site, but had the ill-luck to be reading the sections out of order. But now, i've finally reached the end at 4 am and i wanted to comment while it was fresh.

Favorite scene: Shandra chasing Bishop around the clearing while everyone moves aside in a blase manner. hilarious, though he's meaner.

If you have another section thats boring, just skip and summarize until you get to a part that advances _your_ story. i think we can safely say the readers have either played or read the main storyline enough that you can concentrate on Avera's story.

My only other wish is that Cas felt more like a paladin. A lot of the time he is acting like a fighter with some extra bells ans whistles. He's one of my favorite sidekicks, but doesn't display much of the warrior-priest/templar/faith-holder that I think is the core of the class. Find a palidin with faith, but not zealot somewhere in fantasy/history/science fiction/comics to help. There aren't that many where they really show faith, instead of lipservice, but they are out there.

Thanks for all the work, and, again, hope to see an update

*gasp* your alive!

Well, missed your story ;)

“You know very well I do not like this. You know very well I’d rather boot Nasher’s royal hiney into a wall then be here. So,” She put her arms over her chest,

Exactly my thoughts when I got to that part... haha. Nasher's hiney! Yeah... give him a juicy big kick and Nevalle as well.

And you are an evil woman, leaving us with this cliffhanger! I want to know what will happen?
Can't wait for the next part =)

Btw. what would you call a human /halfing mix? Humfling? (Hides under a rock)

Another amazing chapter, dear!! I absolutely adore the conversations, they make me laugh!! Keep it up, even if it takes a while, they're totally worth it!

“Oh now I am so impressed with your capabilities in diplomacy and observation. ‘Sand things’ of all things! I swear I may just request a room full of monkies. They are much more understandable then this crew.”

Maddy! I love you for that sentence! Brilliant.

Gods... that's so like him. *swoon* *cough* uhm sorry... didn't mean to drool.

*hugs*
Kynrael

Get in there Sand...lol. ;) Loved this chapter, Tigerlilly sounds great, unuasal mix as well.
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"By Tyr's right buttock"...lol. I love the description of this fight scene, very visual. Mayhem of spells, arrows and blades, just how I like it. ;)
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I wonder, Elanee's thrown a spanner into the Avera/Casavir works, sounds good. Neeshka made me laugh, trust her to pay attention to lower aspects of Vale. Lol. Keep writing, my friend.
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You win, yet again. I adore 16 and 17 a ton. XD

Its well written, and it makes me want to hug Avera even more. Though she might not appreciate that. :x

Maybe I am a sex starved vixen - dam this sentence rocks

Avera is a fantastic, comical character. I love how the little people always seem to be the most fiery and aggresive, but you haven't over done it with her. Avera's relationship with Casavir is both heartwarming and delicious at the same time, poor paladins and their pent up emotions. Lol.
I really like writers who ignore the safety barriers of writing fanfictions and go the extra mile in creating painfully realistic stories like this. You're writing stands out from many others due to this. I look forward to reading your other Avera adventures!
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Its ChonNiso from the Bioware forums. I am here to say that YOUR STORY FILLED MY RAM WITH WIN!

I love it, keep going! :D

Aw!The Grobnar/Shandra relationship is so cute!