my thoughts are that for someone who claims to be writing this after catching chunks of Bones on TV occasionally or watever...its absolutly brilliant!...u've got the characters and chemistry down pretty well so don't sell urself short!plus the whole point of FF is that u can give characters ur own little spin so i think ur doing a fabulous job...only u need to update like..now!it been almost more than a year...n im eagerly waiting for more!!...here's to more frequent updates and lots of BB goodness!great job!carry on!

Looved this.. Wasn't sure I wanted to read it since it hadn't been updated in a year, but I'm glad I did, and it ended it a nice place, so it's all good. I laughed out loud at Booth's thoughts in the car, that was just hilarious. And the ending was so sweet.. Loved that they were both willing to take the risk, especially Brennan, who wasn't as sure about it as Booth might've been, but she still went there..

This definitely made me smile :)

e! (that was my girly-Angelesque-squeal) You're story is so good. I like that the kisses are happening but first it was just little kisses and that they didn't just hop into bed. because when it finally happens I don't think that they will. anyway this chapter was totally cute (and a little um.. warm) so keep up the good work!

Very nice, very sweet. Fluffy, mainly due to the lack of a plot (or a dead body), but keep going with the Dr Wyatt angle.

I'd have to say my favorite part of this chapter (save the very nervous Booth in the car) was your metaphor, "the fog of awkwardness that flooded the car was so thick that Booth and Temperance would have sworn they lost sight of one another for a moment." I really like that image.

I look forward immensely to the next chapter!

Believable. They start tentativly and careful. And now they are dating though Temperance did deny it at first. I can hear Angela squealing - grin.

I have to admit I was highly entertained by the line: “not only were the stars not shining any brighter, but it was actually a bit cloudy.” Hee! But yes, very nice update!

the idea of the not-dating-let's-kiss thing is great - looking forward to the meeting between them and angela

Ow OW! More, please.

Great chapter. Loved Booth's total attack of nerves and Brennan calling him on it.

I love how you wrote Booth. First being all fidgety and nervous and then after the kiss he was all confident and cocky again. This was so sweet and well-paced.

aw sweetness!:)

Ahh, silly Bones! It wouldn’t be a mistake….and I’m scolding fictional characters now. Heh. I was also highly entertained by their version of “not dating.” But yes, I liked very much!

Great kiss! I like their nervous but willing conversation and the way they picked through the conversation to get to the same thought of trying a relationship. Well done. I look forward to the next chapter, they are so good together in this story. It's nice to see the shy side of them both without having them run away from one another. I think this is how they would be, once they realized they both wanted to try it, I don't think there would be panic and running. As you write it, I think there would be a tentative coming together, feelings of almost relief and exhiliration. Good job, keep writing!

Aw that was adorable! I'm all giggly now. Terrific chapter, you're such a fantastic writer!