fantastic story

Oh that's so sad I wonder what happens next.It's driving me crazy I've got to know what happens next.MORE MORE MORE

i think that this story is amazing!

OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, THIS IS AMAZING, COOL, AND VERY INTERSTING. I LOVE IT. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPSATE SOON!:)

AWESOME!
Nice story line...

I'm sorry I just gota let this out...
Ha! Ha! *cough*cough* a sister...driving the car...Jasper, Emmett, Rosalie..HA!!
Okay, I'm composed... You kinda noticed that the second and first chapter are the same...RIGHT?
Anyway I like it...I'll review again..

update update plzplzplz!

ok i like the story but if you do different POVs dont repeat the whole passage...

Hmm...I can tell this will be interesting. Cant wait till you update!

I think u just rewrote the first chapter as the second one. IF u need help taking that away just ask! once again, good luck! great job!

Wow, nice job!! Oh, and thanx for the dedication, if you need any of my help, just ask! Great job!

post more!

How does he not know he has a sister? What? I love it though. WRITE MORE RIGHT NOW!!

o dis sounds interesting update please!!

oh oh! update!