Another wierd thing, I was listening to Beautiful Soul by Jesse McCartney when Troy was saying how he doesn't the laura is for him... strange

u know wat's freaky? I was listening to Tell Her by Jesse McCartney while Troypay were dancing 2gether. Wierd

awesome!

susah di baca

Please update!! I'm waiting... for the next chapter!

I got really confused when she screamed just because someone put their hands over her eyes. But I still loved it. ;)

nice story!hey check out my story too..its title is "TRUTH OR DARE"

Shar,

I love this chapter. It was really good! =D
I JUST LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
Hmm but just an FYI you wrote a lot of "he" "she" mistakes.
You know like you wrote "she" instead of "he" or something like that.
But yet the chapter was still awesome. =D
M I loved it..even for a Troypay! HAHA

You know I wrote this the other day based on this story:
An angel sent from above,
To help me find true love.
I want to be free, i want to be love.
And she gives me all that I deserve.
But with a rule that forbids our love,
Our heart can only break in two.
So send me a sigh, send me a message and tell me
..that I can love my true love.

Yes I know it does suck but hey I was bored. Trust me I can never write as well as you can!

ILYSM

Okay,

I know,I know,
::Raises arms in the air: I haven't
been much of a faithful reader right?
Geez, you haven't like e-mailed or
spoken to me for like...ages, and I guess its
my cue to take the blame, right?
I'm sorry...
It just makes me so upset that we don't as much
and our lives have just swiftly moved on...
I know I've always asked you this from like the first day,
but seriously sometimes when I think about it, the
truth is that you're like the first
ever person I knew on fanfiction, and to miss
having those convos and such just makes me weep...
When I first came onto the site you
were like the first member that greeted me
and such, and now you're hardly online
and we havent spoken for months...years...decades?
If I've done anything...sorry?
I'm not the kind of person that realises
mistakes till the last minute,
so if I've EVER offended you or anything,
then shoot...and i'll try to fix it?
...

Anyway I havent exactly been reading the story
for ages so it took me some time to
figure out what I was reading and what was
happening...
Seriously...this story is some good stuff,
You're a real good writer...::no sarcasm intended::
haha xD
You've really got the troypay going!
And just one question...you ever gonna...

UPDATE? HUH?

Please? For me? I really need more...

And keep up the good work x

Samrina

Hello my baby! :]
Gawsh, longish time, no see! Aww, I keep playing your "MOMMY I LOVE YOU!" over and over LOL.
Aww :]
I love this storryy!
So muchh!
You have GOT to update soon :]
AND REMINISCING! It's my favourite ;]
Get on MSN, sweetie. LOL. I miss choo.
And you gotta talk to Aunty Hannah on msn!
Gawwsshh.
ily mucho!
Mommy x

ellos gosh i looked at my last review i sent u n it was like a short story lol sry XD

wow i havent talked to u in like forever n ever n ever...
i comment u on myspace but u never comment back :{

a.w. the chappy was cute they finally kissed somebody say YEAH -yeah lol.

oh yea that song i told u bout by Ne-yo its called Angel i was listening to it and totally fit these story to me.

you can on youtube n look for it r letssingit ( dot) com
n find the lyrics it muy beautiful!!

hey what cleberity person can u rlate Bradin to uya' know just to kinda get a mental pic of what he looks like

oo ur gonna be a mermaid a.w.e.s.o.m.e ( i happen to use that word alot) o n i used the tsunami by u for my first history ' current world report' i got a check on it damn teachers lol

I GOT A NEW PRINTER! YAY ME ok sry
oo yea i joined my school chorous im having a winter concert yipee!

ok lubb ya Yoda babez!!

peace & luv marri bear (:))

oo this is good! write more

Woo lol u didnt die! Gr8 update, thnx i

you're not the most hated person ever, my duckie! :D

LOL.
woww.
yees, wait.
HE BROKE UP WITH LAURA RIGHT?
YES. I'M GUESSING YES :D

I HAVE TO.
I MEAN.
THIS IS TROYPAY AT SAKE.

... anyways.
(:
LOL.

woow.
i freaking love this story.
a little troypay action would've made it a little better for my taste. cause you know how much i love my troypay.
but other than that, it's fabb.
totes

*scoffs*
It totally sucks, sorry to say... Meh...j/k. It kicked arse...but it was too short for my liking. But I'm sure if it was longer I would've complained so it's just better if you ignore me.

WHOO!
Nice to see you're alive and well...after what? Two months?!? I should hate you right now...but you're so...Tarty! And where would I be without my daily- well monthly Tarty.

Jeeze-us!
That rhymed! WHOO! So how's life deary? It's been so-so for me. It's had its ups and downs. I'm begging to get the HSM2 DVD, hopefully I will get it. You know...when I get a credit-card which will be in the next...*counts on fingers* a hundred years? I think so...it's a hundred.

WELL...
*cough* You went on hiatus? Wow...the things you miss when you're on a ban. School, I would like to inform you, SUCKS! but then again, I would like to get somewhere in Life...

EW!! :O
I sound Old! Another side-effect. I should sue my school. But I haVen't hEard from you in a long time! MY, how we have drifed way, we need some Ash+TARTY time...you know when you're not busy doing...Traty stuff.

Yeah...all those capital letters near the end...starting from I would like to get... (crossing out EW!!) mean something if you read it in order...well if you're smart enough.

I'll catch you later Tarty!
Ash