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| Kristafied 2007-05-26 ch 1,  | abuseWow. This is outstanding. I love the escalating intensity of these encounters -- the one with Greg is particularly good. I like how you've taken his feelings for Sara seriously and gone beneath the surface. |
| contrarymotion 2007-05-23 ch 1, | abuseWhat a lovely story. I loved the scene with Greg...it was really touching. Do you have a beta? It was a wodnerful story, and some of your sentences were wonderful, but there were a few in there that were a bit confusing. |
| angry penguin 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseVery well done. |
| Susire 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseOh..my god. That was beautiful. I've always love Sara; she's my favorite character from CSI. I like that everyone likes her, it's a nice feeling, isn't it? I *loved* Greg's little speech. Oh. That hit hard. “Do you think I like to love you?” he shouts in return, banging the locker door closed. She jolts backwards, eyes wide in disorientation. I loved that line; so *Greg*. I don't normally review for stories but this one was just too good to pass up. “Take a look around, Sar. Catherine might be the one that guy wanted, but it’s not her the girl who has every single man in the lab wrapped around her finger.” Oh, I've always like this concept and this line was just perfect. It goes along the similar line of a fic I really like, Femme Fatale, and oh, that story and this story are just teh love. I kind of wanted her to realize what Greg said to her, that even if Grissom finally opened his eyes, he still wouldn't be worthy of her. I still loved it though, Grissom and all. |
| Lilith 2007-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG, so awesome! You're my little drug, Luna, I love your stories, you always make things so real... It's fantastic. It was something new and very pleasing to read. Sara deserves to know how beautiful she is, on the outside and on the inside. |
| Meags2387 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! I especially liked what you did with Greg. |
| marina 2007-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abusebeutiful! very well written, congrats!! |
| Peggy47 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseFeeling discouraged and downhearted, Sara can have a lonely and blue expression on her face. However, the brightness of her beautiful smile expresses her pleasure, joy, kindness, and love. By reading your well written story, we are sharing in her growing happiness. |
| anneruhland 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abusewhat a lovely story. It makes my heart smile. anne |
| nick55 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abusewow, wow, WOW!! |
| Fire in the night 2007-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a really lovely story. I loved the emotion conveyed within it, and I loved that it coveyed how different members of the team viewed Sara as beautiful, even when she felt that she was not. (Although, my first thought when Grissom told her he would love her even if she looked like Ecklie was EW!! :P) Great job! |
| violet4now 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was a wonderfuly touching story. I loved how all the guys tell her how much she is loved by all of them. Nick was the best one. Jorja has an amazing smile. Thanks!! |
| ayesha-s 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseoh so sweet!! |
| shania1277 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWow just wow! This is one of the most beautiful story I've read recently!!You've done an amazing job portraying Sara's insecured feelings as well as the boys's ones and of course the ending is gsrtly (?)perfect.Thank you . ;-D |
| CSILightening 2007-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it! So cute and SO perfect. I really liked Warrick's part, i think it was my favourite. Though the ending was good too. the entire thing was IC, which i like. :) I hope you'll keep writing -Lightening |