OK, I know it's an old fic, but I agree with the others. MORE PLEASE!!

Wow! I'm loving this story. It is very adorable, and, like Kaylee says, endearingly elementary school.

Just one thing though, I think there are two typos up at the beginning of this chapter (the second, "Regifted"):
"He’ certainly hadn’t meant for everyone to thing something of it. "
Did you mean to type 'think? Is the apostrophe at the end of 'He' necessary?
second typo: "She put the ear phones in with the hooks around the shell of her ear so that the tiny speakers didn’t tall out..."
I imagine that was meant to read "fall out...," as it makes no sense as it stands.

Anyway: I love this series, and your writing in general (I often stop by at rayne_shippers and your lj). Thanks for writing!

Very nice i really enjoyed this

oh, brilliant. 'i'm getting tossed out the air lock.' such a good ending. and so true. hopefully they gave him a suit first... :D

~cd

That's IT? You end with Jayne afraid he'll get tossed out an airlock!? But... I want more... :-(

Which is, actually, a good thing :-)

Great stuff! I love you their feelings for each other are tempered with the realistic grit of their flaws. Now I'm off to read some of you other Rayne offerings.

what a great story! It seemed to end so abruptly that it came across as a 'cut off' instead of a real ending. I'd sure like to see a little more resolution (or a sequel!)

Very nice characterization, but it does seem to… end in the middle. I would suggest an epilogue to let people know if Jayne gets run through the engines or tossed out the airlock.

Aw... Jayne is such a sweety!

Oh, I like this very much, keep it coming!

This was great.

very nice ending, although I really didn't want it to end there. Hopefully Kaylee, Wash and Book will be enough to keep Jayne from getting tossed out the air lock. He really was getting good at giving her gifts, what with the cracked prism. It certainly took some of the crew long enough to notice all the flirting between Jayne and River, even it was elementary school flirting.

You have to appreciate Zoe not feeling a particular affection for either Jayne or River but not wanting Book to tell Mal about what's happening in case it causes more trouble. At least Kaylee seems in support of them having a flirtation, as her actions were very bratty little sister at the end. I was surprised when Jayne went through the effort to fix the carving, and impressed he didn't just make a new one. Clearly it will mean more to River that something damaged was made whole again given her identification with the statue.

Interesting to see the gifts everyone got her, and how Simon seemed the most oblivious about what she would really like. Everyone else did a good job of finding a gift that represented an interest or a desire, even Mal with his gift of chores. I'm thinking Jayne had the flash because her pose was a mirror image to the carving he made. I'm sure Kaylee's going to worry the thing constantly until she finds out some answers. It was sweet of Jayne to make her something, especially given the amount of time he would have to devote to the carving.

You do realise there needs to be more of this, right?

Well done, I am enjoying this throughly.. Especially the bit about the prism, just beautiful..