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Facing Reality
2008-06-11
ch 6,
abusehahahaha!
aserene
2007-06-08
ch 6,
abuseintersting ending. I like it! great job! Great idea!
MariposaAngel18
2007-06-08
ch 6,
abuseOh GOD!! this was too funny! Congrats on graduation and good luck with ur art show. Best of luck. I loved this story!!
Kelly of the midnight dawn
2007-06-08
ch 6,
abuseGotta love payback :)

Great ending!

Elliot and Olivia for eternity
Merry Shipper Christmas
Proud EO shipper
-Kelly
onetreefan
2007-06-08
ch 6,
abuseoh boy! you are awesome! please more soon!

EO!
onetreefan
marineJAG
2007-05-28
ch 5,
abuseHaha! How cute. I really enjoyed this chapter. Keep up the good work. This is getting more interesting by the chapter. :)
iluvstabler
2007-05-16
ch 5,
abuseAw...that was cute. Hope Liv is ok. If any one should be hurt, it should be Elliot. Liv is always hurt...she needs a break. Update soon...this is good!
onetreefan
2007-05-16
ch 5,
abuseYay! That was so good! i loved the update. You are awesome!

EO!
onetreefan
Kelly of the midnight dawn
2007-05-16
ch 5,
abuseAww! More soon please!

I hope that Olivia will be ok.

Elliot and Olivia for eternity
Merry Shipper Christmas
Proud EO shipper
-Kelly
aserene
2007-05-16
ch 5,
abuseI love the ending!
qt4good
2007-04-27
ch 4,
abuseGood work.. poor David. You know, they are by a stream, they could prob wash the mud off in there :)..
aserene
2007-04-24
ch 4,
abusevery intersting...man i hope this is wasn't becomes of them later on...i like it though update soon!
cathexic
2007-04-17
ch 4,
abuseNormally, I HATE OOC's, but this story is amazing. I mean, really and truly amazing. Funny, and good writing are not two traits I usually see together in these stories, but you've managed it.
qt4good
2007-04-15
ch 3,
abuseGood work :) The only thing I'd like to mention is that I'm Canadian (and I've lived both in Edmonton, Alberta, Canada and in Houston, Texas) and there's a lot more in common between the two countries than just sports. The culture, laws, education, etc are pretty similar actually; Canada's the most similar to the States than any other country actually.. don't get me wrong, there are some differences, but culturally it's not that different..
Kelly of the midnight dawn
2007-04-05
ch 3,
abuse"He feels bad about trying to kill you"... wow, if I were them I wouldn't trust that Armond guy as far as I could throw him. Hey, that's a good idea, throw him off that cliff/hill thing that nearly broke Olivia's arm.

Something in my gut says that Elliot and Olivia are better off on their own. Never trust anyone who ever tried to kill you because if they tried it once, they'll probably try it again.

Can't wait until the next chapter
Update soon
Elliot and Olivia for eternity
Merry Shipper Christmas
Proud EO shipper
-Kelly
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