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Brinkmess
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
Wow, this pretty much had to be one of the better XemSai fics out there. You have a threesome; something that I normally do not some across very often-and it's with Demyx. Just freaking awesome. There are so many other things I can say about this-but I'm sure you've heard them all.

One of the greatest one-shots ever!
RaineArilan
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
Well that crosses all sorts of rating lines for , but like hell I'm telling anyone about it. Hot damn here people! I don't read like ALOT alot of KKH fanfic(too many universes, too many pairings, not enough time) but if there's more like this out there then I am bloody well going to START reading it!
God I love a good ravage and I love how it's so almost noncon, but not really, and how the internal monologues and thoughts grow slowly more incoherent as the fic goes on. So many people forget and have them perfectly intelligent and thoughtful mentally even while they're verbally incoherent and that just ain't realistic in the slightest.
M. If I ever get up the nerve to write myself a threesome lemon THIS is the standard I intend to shoot for. My afternoon has just been brightened immeasurably. *hands out cookies* Great job.
Bad Wolf Forever
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
Dude. The hottest story that I have ever read in the history of ever. You are a genius, dude.
Nocturnal-Ivy
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
I'm really not that into threesome lemons but OH! HOLY! FUCK! XD

That seems like an almighty fucking session! Thank the Nobody gods Demmy!

Love that it's XemSai too! Fave pairing! ^^
MinxBubbleOo
2008-08-15 . chapter 1
Dang that was hotz! seriously that was smoking
wows okay what else is there to say other than brilliant!!
and i loved it and man was i drooling xD
hot smutt really hot!
Digimon Empress Yaten
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
I... um. Holy crap. Oh my. I don't even know what to say. It's rare to come across Xemnas/Saix/Anyone, much less Xemnas/Saix/Demyx... much less hot sizzling Xemnas/Saix/Demyx that is very well written to boot.

Haha it was very very hard not to just go 'JLAFJSLD THAT WAS GOOD!' so I had to wait a few minutes before reviewing. XD

Awesome job.
ShinagiMuramaki
2008-03-10 . chapter 1
I just looked down at my desk and realized that i was drooling.

Fangirls all over the world thank you.


-Shimaki
Kya Strife
2008-02-16 . chapter 1
Wow.
LOTRchic
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
wow, this is a really good story... Hee hee.. You should write some more stories.
Dilenaxa
2008-01-30 . chapter 1
now that right there is HOT and SEXY! keep up the smutty smut! (my kind of reading material ^-^)
-LunaAriana-
2007-12-27 . chapter 1
this is the Luna half of LunaAriana and i just wanted to say "Holly Hell!" lol you are an amazing writer and I have never drooled so much on my keyboard *blushes and wipes mouth* ahem, anyways, I'm sure you didn't need me to tell you all that :] keep up the writing!! I absolutly loved how you made Demyx so nervous and needy, so cute! :] I'll be sure to read more of your stories!!

~*~Luna~*~
KonranKoneko
2007-12-19 . chapter 1
This is by far one of the single greatest yaoi fanfics I have ever read in my entire life! You are a wonderful person. I love how it just starts out as Demyx watching. Xemnas being calm through almost the whole thing was wonderful, and him just giving orders and sitting back for parts of it are good too. Saix being submissive is already hot but you just made it even better. The very end was so good and sweet too!
Johanna Bella
2007-12-09 . chapter 1
*drools onto her keyboard* *wipes it up and slurps* That. Was. HOT! I'm so faving this!
Saphir Neis
2007-09-28 . chapter 1
Ugh, I friggen love it!
So much that I read it ALOT, and I even printed it out and read it in class and almost got caught reading smut O:

But it was all good :3
YoukaiAnjiru
2007-09-18 . chapter 1
Omg O_O You have made this pairing seem like one of the best things in the world. Thank you for that XD The smut was absolutely wonderfully hawt! lol And the ending was adorable~ >.< I am definitely faving this~ 8D
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