My goodness, how do you write like this?
It's unbelievably good!
Man, you've good skills.
So, when's the next chapter coming up, huh?
Please update soon!
I'm dying to read more . . .

I loved your first story, and to find you writing a sequal makes me realy happy! Oh, how I love the twister game! I wouldn't mind playing with Sephiroth though, if t was that fun! Please, continues this!

Wow. That's a long chapter. But I just had to come read the sequal now didn't I? Update soon!

Yay! New story. Awright, I'm trying to get Kim to update my story...but it's taking her FOREVER. I just don't understand her sometimes...but anyway, this one seems so much more sad than the last one! Aww, I hope everything turns out okay...but maybe not. You never know.

Pardon Me...**,

But last time I checked I was the one that saw the shrink most recently. And it is quite an invigorating experience. Not like you would know, because you should be on Haloperidol decanoate, since apparently you lose touch with sane reality on some occasions. One example would be conspiring to kill someone’s boyfriend, just because you are so very manly doesn’t mean that a gay guy is going to want you. Maybe you should try a lesbian that wants a butch woman. Or you could just find a girly guy that needs a big WOAHman to protect him. But hey, that’s up to you. Oh yea, **.

Contently Yours,
Clinton

P.S.

Oh BTW, ** story.

Oh loved it, loved it^^ I'm so glad you made a sequel, and I can very much imagine Riku being soaked, with his clothes clamping to him...te-he, talk about sexy! The Twister part was awesome, great job^^ Update soon please, I look forward to it^^

-Riku-stalker

Sorry but i did not really like this chapter.

I completely understand why i don't like it.

You have some major issues...
i recomomend you see Dr. Smiley, a certafied shrin.

You also have some major writing problems.

for one,
it's fanfiction, everyone knows who and what the character look like, don't take time to describe them.

second,
Chick, you just need help!

OMG i love it soo so much although i feel bad for Brandon...but still i love it, especially when they were playing Twister hehehe i cant wait for chappy 2. yay for Kai that her and Tidus are going out thats so great since usually its Selphie and Tidus so its good to have a mix up^^

This looks pretty interesting, I would L O V E to see this continued... Please? And thank you. ^_^
So far it looks awesome and I can't wait who Riku cheats on Sora with (crosses fingers and chants) please let it be Axel... Please let it be Axel... No wait! Please let it be Axel or Demyx... Please let it be Axel or Demyx.
Okay so, great job and uupdate soon 'kay?
*bliss*