   Soul Stance 2007-07-26 . chapter 5its cool that rin changed from weak to strong.and its kazuma arashi and kazuma naruto cuz they used uzumaki cuz no one knew naruto's who his dad was so uzumaki is a substitute.a.k.a.:uzumaki is fake! |
 ScarletEmber 2007-06-14 . chapter 9*claps* aww it was soo cool and don't worry i totally understood what u said before it's nice to see team connections and family connections just one question who wuz da girl dat hated rin i'm guessing it was neji's daughter? |
 Cherry Blossom55 2007-06-14 . chapter 9awesome stroy please make another sequal |
 Ribbon-chan03 2007-06-14 . chapter 1...umm, I'm sorry if you didn't know this, but Sakura's eyes are green...not hazel |
| Cherry Blossom55 2007-06-05 . chapter 8 this is an amazing chapter |
| ScarletEmber 2007-06-05 . chapter 8 finally the bonding i've been waiting for...just in case u didn't know this is TheRealStarfire i changed my penname because...well i felt bored lolz. great chapter i liked how u showed how sasuke's a horrible father figure...to his daughter anyway |
| ScarletEmber 2007-05-22 . chapter 7 yay! funny how she just punched a wall there r da prisoners me likey! keep going!! *of course you will!* |
 Gaara's Hug Buddy 2007-05-22 . chapter 7... perty kool... |
| MissDramalicious 2007-05-21 . chapter 7 hehe, how come the sound didnt find them 4 b ing so loud? |
| Cherry Blossom55 2007-05-19 . chapter 7 awesome chapter and im not one of those who care how late you update...so far this is an amazing story |
| Cherry Blossom55 2007-05-12 . chapter 6 awesome chapter and this is turning out to be a great story!! |
| Cherry Blossom55 2007-05-11 . chapter 5 awesome chapters |
| anime'princess'forever 2007-05-11 . chapter 6 Nice story u have! I totally love it! Looking forward on ur next chappie! |
 kattylin 2007-05-09 . chapter 6nice... |
| MissDramalicious 2007-05-08 . chapter 6 OH NO! i wanted to no wut happens next *sniff sniff* |
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