Beautifully written :D

I really liked it, except I don't get the end. Did he die? or just go unconcious?

Awesome! Your array of vocabulary is pretty good, unlike mine... (-.-') Anyways, keep up those writing skillz!

why wouldn't I recognize you i started reading your stories right after yu replied and I like this story mayia and I'm glad you reviewed it I will update my longer story shortly as well

OMG! I think you should continue cause you know that I know how some of the rest of the plot goes and i think that it would be really bomb so i wanna you to write more! :D

-Amy