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| mari6s 2007-05-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseHi! Just to say I'm still here and I really enjoy reading this story... Continue! |
| julian's angel 2010 2007-04-29 ch 5, | abusereally good but i hate laren! |
| islandphoenix 2007-04-16 ch 4, | abusegreat story! i love the flashbacks to syd and nadia as kids... so cute! it was sad when syd just ditched nadia like that... and what's lauren doing there? she isn't gonna split syd and vaughn up is she? update soon! ~bluebird |
| AMBERLEAH 2007-04-16 ch 4, | abuseGreat update. I liked the conflicting emotions with jack...how she was confused at being so angry. and then with Nadia. I like the stories where Sydney is raised by her mother. because she would have turned out different...but there's always this part of her that wants to do good. anyhow, the emotions are written very well. they come across strong and believable. |
| mari6s 2007-04-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseStill here! And waiting for the sequel! Continue, I love that. |
| Karandash 2007-04-09 ch 3, | abuseWhoa. What a cool setup. Keep writing! |
| Mrs.Scott323 2007-04-09 ch 3, | abuseGreat beginning and a very interesting story! I hope there will be a spyfam reunion somewhere ;) |
| AMBERLEAH 2007-04-09 ch 3, | abuseGreat beginning...i'm excited to see where this story leads. |
| mari6s 2007-04-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseThe idea is amazing and very interesting, I'm waiting for the sequel with impatience! |
| Sydney 2007-04-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like your story so far. it is really good. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. until then. :) :) :) :) :) |
| soccergirl161 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI like your story so far. It is really good. Not trying to be mean or anything, but you might want to let people who do not have an account to let them review your story, you might get more reviews. Any ways I will check back and see how your good story is developing. Good Luck!! |
| Rapier-3 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseReally interesting, and so far so good. I would really like to this continue. Keep it up! |