This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

You HAVE to write MORE!

aw, theyr so cute together! _ i hope misty gives brock and richie a piece of her mind after interrupting them! whens ketak going to appear? cant wait for your next chapter _

What about Ketak and the killing. - THE KILLING! well written and funny. stupid shannon and her good writing skills gr. again more with Ketak and killing

Continue plz! story was good! must know what happens next!

O.o; ... _ FUNNY!

It.Is.So.Cyute! Um...Sorry, I'm not good at giving criticism of any kind...Support, yes, Kind words, definatly, but criticism, nope, sorry..._;

Shannon, you've outdone yourself. HILARIOUS! BTW, you should see the play Mama Mia. That's good. Also fits well with Pokemon plots. JUST FINISH ONE SUPER GIRL ALREADY AND CONTACT ME! YOU'VE DROPPED OF THE FACE OF THE UNIVERSE. Signed, perhaps your only close friend who you've never seen his/her face before.

I LOVED IT!I HOPE YOU FINSH IT VERY SOON!

sailorsun195

hahaha...good story i really love it and i want it continue and let Misty and Ash cick sum brock and Ritchie Ass(joke)It was good but i m getting impascient when the will tell each other thier feelings.But continue.Read them read them read them all gotta read them all pokemon!

lol

""¡He did it,¡ both boys hissed pointing to the other.""

XD Ano... gomen nasai for not reviewing these days, Espe... *bows apologetically* Been really busy... lame excuse, huh? .

hehe my friend say SHITAKI MUSHROOMS too hehe. He says that insted of the 's' word for crap. _ Richie and Brock the jig is up! Your caught hehe.

*giggles* Cyute...The end was just perfect, lol. And the lobster tail. *u<* *sigh* It was too short...*sweatdrops* I say that too much, ne? Oh well. It was still good! The way you didn't have any dialogue until the last bit was cool. Like they just woke from a dreamworld or something...*sweatdrops* Was that poetic or what? *o_O*; Um...Keep writing please! Hai! Tat's all! *.*;;

*laughs* oh, i've been waiting forever for you to update! this chapter was soo funni! and the Totodile Hunter instead of the Crocodile Hunter...clever.

That was sooooo cute! I can't wait for the next Chapter! _

about time you updated! :D i dont know when im going to update Red Rose, but thats besides the point ; you know im truly loving the romance in this chapter. you better update again soon or i'll send my violent cookies after you. - awesome job!