What's your take on the news of The United State's 'President' Obama wining the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize?
I was in shock, and wanted to scream WTF--which I'm glad some newspapers did (if not in actual words, then attitude).
I do not want to consider the knowledge that Barack Obama is now 'honored' as much as Mother Theresa, Mohammed Ghana (or was it Mohammed Gandhi?), and other late historical figures who fought 'the good fight'.
The very first person to congratulate Mr. Obama was Fidel Castro--the communist dictator of Cuba.

I agree with a few statements I've overheard: America is dead, the country is falling apart.
What happened to the blessings we received in years past?

Because these people are no longer following and honoring God, he has removed his hand of wisdom from its leader, and his hand of protection from the land, leaving it open to plagues (a.k.a. diseases), enemies, and a host of other evils.

i've been reading Isaiah, and, unfortunately, have to agree with what it says in Isaiah chapter 6 verses 9 through 13.
It's the coming of the tribulation, and the whole world is being deceived.

Jeremiah has something similar to say about today's times (because History really does repeat itself)

What are your views?
The time to take a stance is NOW!

That was awesome!

yay! Shafelm the Third! Edmund's odd-numbed swords will last longer than the even-numbered ones, so this Shafelm has a good chance of surviving more than a month.

This was a wonderful chapter. The absolute love shared among all the siblings in the stories was so evident. I loved Peter and Edmund's gentle teasing, and how Jaerin offered his arm to his sister without being prompted.

Jaerin's oath to Jaer is as powerful and heartfelt as Edmund's to Peter. Both scenes were lovely to read and imagine. Beautifully done.

I don't know what to say I'm blown away by the awesomeness of this chapter and how well you've written both sets of brothers. The Brother fluff in this chapter was the best! I'd go back again to read it again and again.

My especial favorite was and Jaerin's oath and "Pot. Kettle."

Keep Writting,

God bless,
Floppyearsthebunny

Beautiful!
Loved it!
Lg luna

Yes, I squealed with delight with this exquisite chapter.

“Pot. Kettle.” Peter said, innocently looking up at the ceiling. Edmund blushed. This is priceless as it describes both of them. It received a good loud chuckle from me.

This was such an incredible and moving chapter. The emphasis on a brother's love just precious and I love seeing it throught this story. Wonderful to see such fabulous work and I'm waiting in anticipation for the next chapter.

^_^
Rolletti

Oh tissue, tissue, need more tissue. This just brought tears to my eyes. Oh how sweet and brave the brothers are. Sacrificing, not thinking of themselves as they recount what happened.

Another great chapter that deserves an award for drawing out a multitude of emotions.

Rolletti

OMGOSH, I'm glad I have two more chapters to go. If I had read this earlier I would have died with the cliffhanger. Such a carefree day, once they escaped, and then out of no where, a cliffy. Great writing as all ways, sweets.

Sorry, I have to stop reviewing and go on or I'll start typing gibberish, as I'm filled with anticipation.

Rolletti

Yay! More cool awesomeness. Reminds me that I need to get working on my story sometime soon. Anyway great couple of chapters here. The wolf fight last chapter and the presentation of Shafelm I were all great. I also liked Rien's apperance here. It's always kinda fun to see her pop in and out. Looking forward to more whenever you get around to it.

Squee!! What a wonderful chapter, brother's are so great sometimes! Update soon!

This was so very beautiful and moving! I loved how you show the relationships between both sets of brothers, and then how they interact together as a group of four. And then the whole scene at the feast when Peter bequeathed the Dukedom to his brother was so touching; you incorporated the oath from Elecktrum's story very well here. Even with Jaerin's simpler oath to his brother, it was no less important and strong than the Pevensies'.

This is so beautiful. You have captured the relationship (s) of the brothers so well. Both Jaer and Jaerin and the Kings. Thank you.
Lion bless you,
Eavis

As always everything was dipicted beautifully in your writing. I think your going to have trouble ending this story when you want to though, you have a great universe to play with. Hope it's a long way off. Keep writing

Nice!

Wow, I was not expecting to find wolves here. What an unexpected development! But the Peridansons were very brave and they fought well against the beasts; I'm sure all those lessons helped them a bit here. At least both of them are okay, even if Jaer will take a bit more time to recover. And this was a lovely bonding moment between the brothers.