That was Awesome! seriously, friggin hawt! xD loved it

Me likey. Please continue. ^^

Wonderful oneshot.

hot! eek!!

Yay for shota LeonCloud! ^_^ I'll shaddup now. Again, I don't know what to say. Another one of your well-written fics. Ooh, I wonder what you meant by 'the end (but not really)'. Hmm.. Continue gracing us with your great fanfiction!

~Xephlyn

I. Love. You.

That was great I love cyte but smutty stories like that
and the idea of a 13 year old cloud just turns me on ^^
lol
that was great (again)

-Button

XD Oh god - that was cute and yummy and sweet all wrapped up in a neat little package

Omigod! You should totally write like a sequel to this! Tee-Hee. I love innocent 13 yr old Cloud.





P.S. Nutella rocks! :]

OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU! THIS WAS GREAT! YOU need to continue it to where it goes on to hwat Leon taught Cliud * snicker* OMG I EFFING LOVE YOU!

Wahahahaha. teenage hormones win.
this was very nice and awkwardly hot in that awkwardly hot way.
thank you for writing.

What an absolutely marvelous story. The hook at the beginning was really good. Keep it up and thank you for writing this!

Oh man, I read this over on your LJ, but didn't comment there as livejournal confuses the heck out of me. XD BUT! Now I have tracked it down on ffnet and am free to leave a worshipful comment!

So then. I love how you wrote Leon and Cloud in this. I don't think I've ever found another young!LeonxCloud fic before, and if so it definately wasn't up to par with this. You've so perfectly captured both their characters and their age - Leon's semi-maturity keeping him from immediately giving in but eventually doing it anyways, Cloud's fumbling innocence and willingness to try and get it right - and everything about this fic is just perfect. A lighthearted, slightly porny, slightly paedo-y, Leon/Cloud fic. I approve. X3 Two CLC loving thumbs up!


...In other news: UM, CONTINUE PLEASE? Not to nag, but you know. Just putting it out there. XD

"Squall heard his resolve throwing itself off a cliff." Oh my fucking god, that is the best quote in existance XD

As for the rest of the fic, love it. So cute and fluffy :3 but some nice porny-ness at the same time :D

nice work! :D

--Silver

:blushes furiously: That was just... yummy and nice and :hides her red face behind her hands: I can just imagine how poor Leon must have looked when Cloud told him he heard him do it, while shouting his name. :blushes some more: Waah~!
Nice work! Please keep it up!

That was different. I'm glad that no one seemed to have hurt feelings in the end. You create some amazing writing.

-MC