Hehe, I luf this story too! In fact, I love this story so much that I couldn't stop drawing child SquallxCloud art for days! I also started writin my own SquallxCloud stories, and it's all thanks to your amazingly cute fics!

Keep up the great work, oh great writer of CxL!

~ Sushi

Just plain adorable!

For some reason I felt kind of sad at the end... but it was a happy ending, right? I always get sad at the end of stories... :]

This is ridiculously cute, ya know. So, so ridiculously cute. D:

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AW! I just had to sit in the dentist's office because of cavaties from the sweetness of this story, but it was so worth it. (and I'm terrefied of the dentist XD)

*favs*

Aw, this was so sweet! I really love the fics you write which include child Cloud and Leon. So innocent, and warm! Thanks for a great update!

~Xephlyn

Absolutely charming. ^^ +500 points for cuteness.

Awesome!! It's really cute and I love the cross our hearts part. Good job!

Well, shit. this was beautiful and cute and those boys are so silly, and to think of them as kiddies and actually doing this it's-- you are a genius, for serious. thank you for writing.

So cute.
The whole idea of little!Leon and little!Cloud having a mock fight and trying to beat each other in strength just makes me go "aw". They must have been really like this when they were still kids; all cute, all brash; innocent and augh, did I mention cute? By the way, I like how Merlin came in just in time to patch them up, and I like the ending. It's so adorable. Little!Cloud giving Little!Leon a kiss. :all the fluff:
Nice job! Please keep it up!

this was really good. and i mean really good. so cute! plz keep writtin more

~Forbidden Moon Child of Darkness

cute ^_^