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WO HO X3
IT'S ABOUT TIME TART STARTED GROWING X3

Announcing:another great story by Rin-chan!!
Haha!Great job on this one buddy.It was really cute,you're great with the TartXKish relationship.

cute! i love Tart's shortness. although, a tall kid in my gym class called me a midget once, and it made me think of Ichigo calling Tart a midget.

anyway, a note about splitting the fic's paragraphs up. Musa Rox was probably saying it should be split into proper paragraphs, which you did pretty well once you edited it. if you need a better idea about how to break up the paragraphs you could look at other fics to see their format, but i still think you did pretty well. once again, good job.

kawaii!

But this would have been a MUCH easier read if you had split up the paragraphs. So, next time, onegai?

This is pretty cute. Maybe a sequal about how he goes down to earth JUST to compare himself to Pudding, heightwise! hee hee! Insecure much?

SO KAWAII! That is so great! Argh, I just love where you have Pudding's quote in there, and Tart reacting to it! XD