 JAMonMyToast 2008-08-26 . chapter 1Can I just say, "Aw!" that was really sad, but beautifully written and perfect. I liked the way you talked about Angela worshipping God, like it wasn't a tight-** Christian thing to do. I also loved it how she counted Pam and Jim as her friends. Great job. |
 Cousin Mose 2007-03-23 . chapter 1OMG! Dwight's DEAD!!?? THIS IS SO SAD!!
Sorry. I just couldn't resist. This is a lovely and poignant story, and stands perfectly fine as a oneshot, a glimpse of what could be. (But, which we hope doesn't come to pass...'cause I like Dwight.)
We need more stories from the Dwangela P.O.V., because their characters are much more complex and deep than they might appear at first. Good job in delving a little deeper! |