I like the emotions you bring across in this story, and the nice little twist at the end made me go, "d'aw." :D

aw! loved the ending!

You've turned my favourite song into what is now one of my favourite stories.
Thank you =]

Beautiful.

wow...that was really great! ^_^

Nice.
You know, I come back to re-read one of your AxelxRiku oneshots and here I find another cool one.
I like.
I like lots.

Wow! So cute (yes, Cute! XD) and heart warming! I was, er, jumping with excitement at the ending. ^-^ Lovely work! ~thumbs-up~

Now, when I clicked on this, I was like: 'Axel Riku? What in the world...?'
But this fic has changed my mind. ^^ I really love the ending and their conversation. Awesome.

omg! It was really good. I loved the way you pulled off the ending, so...sad? Sweet? Bittersweet?

Ah, where are my words today?

Love your writing, one of the best I've seen on this site.

(Ooh! I'm obsessed with Switchfoot too, muh favorite band)

GUH. your writing is so good! i absolutely loved this :D

*merbles and weeps*

Very sweet conclusion...^-^

Wow... this actually goes with the song. I like it. Thank you for writing a good one-shot

This was, FANTASTIC

That was really gorgeous! I just love your stories, especially your Axel/Riku ones. This one was just really, really sweet

It's just... gah. There's something so achingly touching about this, it's just so hard to put into words. I love how you can fit so much emotion into such a short ficlet. Well done.