Well second review. While let's see...all I can say is I want to know who the girl is and why Ikki keep having dreams about her. I know something happened with the Skull Saders so you have to explain it. The grammer, I'm not sure. I read it pretty well as I was reading the first review somebody gave you. But then again I'm good in Math not English, I try. But your doing good for the first chapter. Update soon.

I suggest using spell check, first of all... or perhaps asking someone to beta read your work. Your misuse of punctuation is abysmal, as well... but grammar check should fix that, too.

Also... gerunds are NOT your friend. Consider changing your sentence structure for more interest; it's easy to become bored quickly with formulaic structure.