 R. Controversy 5/2/02 . chapter 1Finally...Takeru paired up with another girl...I dont see enough of these around. Takatherine rules. Heck, anything that allows me some escape from the wretched persistent Takari fans and their crappily written 600 word fics is good enough for me. Please, make more of these stories. |
 Sana Jisushi 8/29/01 . chapter 1Great story! _ And besides, about the "Takari 4-Ever" thing, Takari is a GREAT couple, but that's not the point. The point is, I guess you're right about variety. |
 Kaelia 7/26/01 . chapter 1WAH! TAKARI 4 EVER!
J/K I don't ever flame people. Besides, I've already been educated by Izzy, Cody, and Big Fat Baby. I really like the way you "Digi-fy" Fairy tales! If you ever open up a mythology class, let me know so I can be the first one to sign up! |
 Griffinmon 7/21/01 . chapter 1_ Kawaii! _ And to think I just watched that very episode with Catherine in it.. _ Love this story! |
 Flower Cannon 7/20/01 . chapter 1 Great story! Yeah, I suppose this was the best choice for the couplings. I can feel about liking new couples. I used to be a Takari freak, but I've gotten addicted to Koushari and, um, Kekeru lately. -_-'';; Catherine was the best choice, looks-wise. And I can imagine her doing most of this stuff, too. I liked this, because it was fairly in character on a character we know next to nothing about. Great style, nice use of Digimon.
*grins* Sometimes I get a feeling that you favor good ol' 'Keru and Iori. Which isn't bad… I favor them myself… _ flo |
 Samurainoble 7/19/01 . chapter 1If I were Takeru I'd beat it out of there the second Princess Goldilocks began her strupid requests. Awe well, it worked for the story, and it was pretty good, 'scept I've never heard of an Owlmon. |
 Jenna D 7/13/01 . chapter 1That was great. The Catherine couplings are kinda cool, and I love fairy tales. J |
 Ken's Gal 7/13/01 . chapter 1 A liked it. Very fairy talish. But it was so sad what happened to Taichi...WAAHHH! Oh well, great story. And by the way, the second chapter of By the Seashore is up. Hehe..it's going to be a multi chapter story...so... |
 Blubglub 7/13/01 . chapter 1Cool. While I have never read the original, your story presents it well. The coupling was new and fresh. Your adaptations of fairy tales are some of the best fics around. Awesome story |
 The TurquoiseCow 7/10/01 . chapter 1I liked this. Poor Taichi. But I didn't think he was too incredibly out of character. He was just a little too trusting of some advisors that had given him bad advice. Kinda stupid on his part. But no one ever said he was incredibly smart.;-) Very cool. _ |
 Dreamwalker 7/9/01 . chapter 1"Mon Dieu, what have I done?" murmured Catherine when Takeru was gone. "You've condemned a really good looking guy to death because you refused to accept his master's proposal," returned Miyako in a less than respectful tone. Hehe... That's the GREATEST line... oh well, on with the review: Well, I liked this. Although I'm not a fan of the couple, I have no qualms with it. I liked the small Izzy cameo. It's technically perfect, but then again, usually it is, or it isn't. I do have a couple problems with this story. It seemed too... undescriptive. He moves from one problem to the next and to the next without any real drama/action/romance/whatever. That also is the major problem with the romance which leads me into the next thing that bugs me. The romance. It was... bad... really really bad. It bugs me. I have to say that I enjoyed this piece a little more than I probably would have because I have read a version of this fairy tale before. Do more of these, they're interresting reads. 3*/5* Just a thought, I would enjoy more of these fairy tale stories if A) you would describe and expand a little; or B) if it was a couple I'm a strong fan of. ;P |
 Kathrine 7/9/01 . chapter 1I love it when you turn fairy tales into digimon stories! And I can see Taichi in that sort of position, even though I like him just the same. Taichi's great, he just tends not to think things through. Great job! |
 Alita 7/9/01 . chapter 1 It's good that people are doing other couples. As much as I like TK and Kari together, after awhile the same thing gets so stale. Every once in a while I do like to look at something new. Good story Time Lady, keep it up! |
 Renn Ireigh 7/9/01 . chapter 1This is really good. |
 trimurti 7/8/01 . chapter 1I love your storytale fics...and I'm noticing that you like to write Takeru as the main character, which I think really fits him. Props for using Catherine instead of Hikari; you're right about the personality issue. I read your guide to reviewing, would this fit in your example of a 'good review'? _ I'd love to see more of these kind of fics from you. |