Ah, it was cool to see those two finally take their hatred of one another to that level. ^^

The image of Zorak pulling himself out from under those rocks with that demonic look on his face, laughing as blood fell from his beak--that was incredible, very memorable. I liked that part a lot. ^^

And heh, yeah, Lokar pretty much blew any chance he had at winning by not knowing when to shut up and shoot. Zorak was definitely right about Lokar talking too much. XD

You really deserve an applause for this great piece of story! *Claps* Zorak is the best!