|Reviews for Public Indecency|
| DW24179 1/7/11 . chapter 1
I laughed so loud at this my mum came in and threw her shoe at me XD iht was gawesome!
| 0987654321poiuytrewqlkjhgfdszx 11/28/09 . chapter 1
Oh MY GOSH! NYA! I THINK! I'M GONNA BLUSH! ACTUALLY! I AM BLUSHING! SO OMG! Luv it!
| shadowninja-yuna 6/19/09 . chapter 1
Ahahahaha, it's... just so amusing to think they'd do that in public. GO EIRI! -cheers-
| Darkened Dawn of Silence 8/10/08 . chapter 1
Hahaha, I don't think Yuki cares if that happened to Shuichi or not...but I wonder WHY he did it?
It was both humourous and total truth...Yuki would do that to him...
| proud-yaoi-fangirl 5/22/08 . chapter 1
Fabulous! I laughed so hard I cried... poor shuichi lol but good for Yuki
| adinush 5/4/08 . chapter 1
really funny! loved it
| KA0RI 11/5/07 . chapter 1
lol I am smiling like an idiot right now, I loved this oneshot, actually I love all your gravitation stories ;
| JadePhoenix.393 9/15/07 . chapter 1
Ohmegosh! That was so... cool! XD Perverted, funny, and Yuki- what else do you want? I definitely enjoyed it a lot.
' “I didn't know you were so whipped,” Mika said with a red lipped smile.. ', ' “You're such an unmannered pig, Eiri. A predictable one, at that.” ' - now I always enjoy Mika's dialogues, but these two take the cake. By far. Nobody can possibly annoy Yuki like she does. Or maybe Shuichi. Lol.
' “My what? I'm not wearing a skirt!” Shuichi said, peering at his backside before hitting Yuki feebly in the chest.
“Panties, either,” Yuki said with a leer, letting his fingertips graze the bare skin beneath the waistband of Shuichi's pants. ' - another one of my fav lines in the story; yeah, am highly perverted as well. o But these were really good.
All in all, good story, with a nice flow throughout. There were some spelling/grammatical mistakes at places, but that's okay. A story written from Yuki's point of view should always be difficult to write ( at least for me -_- ), but you accomplished the task pretty well. Kudos for that!
| Pombella4 7/30/07 . chapter 1
Really funny. Poor Shuichi. But it was his fault for making Eiri wait!
| none111 7/26/07 . chapter 1
lol..."so a few million people know I gave it to you in the bathroom," ...lol
| Cassion 6/13/07 . chapter 1
Haha, it's great.
| rry 6/13/07 . chapter 1
*giggleing like the yaoi obsessed fangirl that she is* i love it! it's great! heeh-heeh!
| Zaphi 5/24/07 . chapter 1
Poor Shuichi! XD He just can't catch a break can he?
| Eirilover223 5/22/07 . chapter 1
loved it. made me laugh _
| Anon 4/30/07 . chapter 1
You seem to be a pretty good writer, but you've got one glitch. The past tense of 'drag' is 'dragged,' not 'drug.'