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| Evil Genius of the COCA 2007-11-25 ch 23,  | abuseMan, that serial killer case is really driving them up a wall... can't wait to see what angle they come up with next. Update soon, I love reading your stories.. especially when they're focused on Greg. ;) Cheers! Signed, EG |
| BekiC 2007-06-04 ch 23, | abuseTwo great chapters. Loved the interaction between Warrick, Greg and Nick in chapter 22. Twas funny. Anyway, I know you are having a little problem with your muse for this fic, so just come back when it is in full mode again. We can be patient. Love it as always. |
| Missing Whisper 2007-05-10 ch 21, | abuseAH! Ooft Nearly ahd me thinking you'd shoot poor Warrick! And I hope they don't! However they outta get him divorced, not a fan of his wife :P |
| coconut-dreamer 2007-05-10 ch 22, | abuseGlad they've found Lindsey and that she's going to okay... and everyone else too. :) |
| poofgoesyourface 2007-05-09 ch 22, anon. | abuseOoh! so they still have a whole other case to solve... good job w/ this chapter, I liked the Greg/Grissom convo. A little constructive crit.: I like the way you write dialogue, you do it really well, but sometimes it gets a little confusing as to who is talking... iono, just something to watch out for... anyways, Good job! I'm hoping to see more soon! -poofgoesyourface |
| kokomocalifornia 2007-05-08 ch 21, | abusei love warrick. ehhe |
| coconut-dreamer 2007-05-08 ch 21, | abuseAww, thanks for the reply. I have no problem with cliffies...they make the story much more interesting! :) I'm glad that they've found Lindsey now, but I'm also sad cause that probably means that the story's getting close to the end. :( I can't wait for more though! |
| BekiC 2007-05-07 ch 21, | abuseAnother great chapter. Loved the tension you created and the bond between Warrick and Lindsey was spot on. And Grissom was the shooter? Woah, nice. Oh, and thank you. :) |
| Poofgoesyourface 2007-05-07 ch 21, anon. | abuseOoh! Awesome chapter! -Poofgoesyourface |
| Missing Whisper 2007-05-07 ch 20, | abuseOh, I love the way Warrick is getting some well deserved attention in this story, he doesn't seem to have enough of that. But again I'm hooked! What's there? Is it Lindsey? Or a bad guy/girl/monster? Can't wait for update! |
| coconut-dreamer 2007-05-06 ch 20, | abuseOh, another cliffe! :) How much fun! Great chapter and I can't wait for more. |
| Rosi 2007-05-06 ch 20, anon. | abuseEH MA GOSH! I new chapter!! And I loved it, even though it was shorter than usual... what does he find... I love how good you demonstrate each characters, its so *squeal* WONDEFUL. One of the best at this I've ever read... |
| Poofgoesyourface 2007-05-06 ch 20, anon. | abuseGah! Another Cliffhanger! Argh! hurry up and update! -poofgoesyourface p.s I like the way you write Warrick, you really get into his thoughts... A lot of the stories I've read get Warrick really out of character, but you're doing a good job! |
| coconut-dreamer 2007-05-05 ch 19, | abuseYou think Warrick would have learnt his lesson. Hehe. Great chapter. Hope they find Lindsey soon! :) |
| poofgoesyourface 2007-05-05 ch 19, anon. | abuseOh my goodness! Something's going to happen to Warrick? Gar! Cliffhangers! lol... anyways, keep up the good work, and update soon, please! -Poofgoesyourface |