 Mireia 2007-03-23 . chapter 1Interesting. I'll admit, HP/JCA is kind of a strange combination for a crossover, but I'm sure you'll be able to pull it off. :) Besides, I've seen stranger Harry Potter fics. MUCH stranger.
There were some sentences that were kind fo awkward as far as verb conjugation and verb placement went. On the other hand, I liked the description of Jade's dream with the snakes.
One question, though: How old are the characters in this fic? IIRC, the beginning of JCA took place after Harry Potter did. |