 rowe78 2007-03-27 . chapter 1I thought I would send along some feedback here as well. As always, I love your writing style in that the reader is able to become fully immersed into the story and what's happening with all the characters. I was wondering how you were going to get the two Slayers together, and I'm glad that it wasn't the result of some affair. Only because I think that they have both grown since Sunnydale and would want to start a relationship on more solid ground.
I liked the scene where Faith has just left Buffy to get her stuff from the car and Buffy stands at the doorway thinking that Faith is leaving her. It's just a few short lines, but I thought it was just a great moment that captured Buffy's vulnerability and need.
I also liked that when both of them are ready to move forward that they were honest about their fears. Faith is scared she's going to mess things up, and thereby ruin the friendship they've developed. Buffy's fear (although it's not really stated as her fear) is that most of her exes are all dead, and I don't think she could stand to lose Faith.
Thanks for the fic, and I look forward to reading some more new stuff in the future. |
 Faith-rulz 2007-03-26 . chapter 1Right, so, I love the first scene, Buffy’s birthday without carnage and death *chuckles*. I especially like the part where Xander pipes up; **“Doesn’t Faith get a ‘Thank You’ kiss? The rest of us all got a ‘thank you’ kiss. It just wouldn’t be fair if she was left out, Buffster.”**
*Snickers*…I can totally see the death glare Faith gives him after that…hehe
You have a done a GREAT job with this, the intensity, the emotion...you have really outdone yourself, hun ;-). I got so engrossed in this story while I was reading it; I swear, a bomb could have gone off and I probably wouldn’t have noticed.
Damn, that kiss was intense…I’m impressed (and kinda disappointed *grins*) that Faith managed to break away before it lead to much more ;-)…
*Snickers*…I had a good chuckle over the coffee scene:
**“Regular right?” she asks as she reaches for the fridge.
“Yeah, I’m easy, remember?” **…*smirks*
And, o, gr…can I just say how peeved I was with Jim for checking up on them…nosy bastard is right *scowls*
Faith’s reminiscing over her past relationship “tragedies” is very deep and VERY well written. Yeah, like you said, broodiness does help lots with your writing…and I totally get how you managed to make yourself more broody writing this *shakes head*
**But I’m scared: scared of what I feel, scared we’ll ** up the friendship we worked so hard to get to, scared that she’s going to break my heart, but mostly scared because I think I want to take the chance.**…very powerful line…it kinda just stands out for me in that whole monologue thingy Faith was doing. Have I mentioned yet how much I totally LOVE this story ;-)
**“Are we ready now, Faith?”** what a great scene, again, this story totally sucked me in…probably why I had to read it a few times before I could write a coherent (and super-long) review ;-)
*Fans self*…damn, woman, talk about getting TOTALLY distracted while reading the B/F making love scene…bloody hell, need to recompose myself so I can finish the epic review *chuckles*…that was HOT!
**“You’re not reading anything into this “red sunrise” thing are you?” I ask pleadingly as I rest my chin on her shoulder.Turning her body to face me, she smiles then stretches to kiss me again, “No.” She laughs once more as she snakes her arms around my neck, “but Will and Giles are so going to.”**…*Snickers*…I love it! That’s classic, and so true…hehe…
So there you have it…epic review! Well, you kinda had to expect it cause you withheld the story from me till posting *pouts and shakes head*…Awesome job, babe…great sequel ;-) |
 Dr. Tan 2007-03-24 . chapter 1 Gah! I told you I couldn't wait for the sequel, and, god! This TOTALLY gave the first one justice!
Goosebumps! Fantastic story, Loved all of it. Can't wait to read what you do next.
Cheers
CF |