This followed through after 'Tarnish' splendidly. I love it. I cried during the recounting of Fado's last hours with Seth. It fits so well. -- Jes

love how you ended this chapter describing the thoughts and how the bath was washing away the cares -- Jes

A very gripping chapter. The song of despair was anice touch. As soon as I read those words, I thought uh oh, he's sank into depression. Thank you for sharing that little dark gem. ... a light moment there with Garcia re marrying , 'aiming high' -- Jes

So glad you didn't kill her of...the cartographer. Avery good chapter, but I can't stop thiking about Eirika! What happened ? Will I find out in the next chapter? Is it lost ? Oh I can't bear it. Poor Seth! It's so hard to write anything down without giving away spoliers in case anyone reads this comment. This tale is so compelling!-- Jes

No... that very last part! cliffhanger indeed! -- Jes

This chapter brought tears to my eyes, the worry and longing for Seth. Laughed re marrying Ines. I specially love Eirika's revisiting memoriesofthe jousts and always giving hertokes to Seth, and of his evenual hesistancy. How romantic... --Jes

A very exciting chapter! I'm wondering if Joshua will come into play. I feel bad for Kyle... his figurine. -- Jes

Aha, and this one was just as good as- if not better than, though I can't decide at this point- the first. Wow, just these two stories have convinces me:
You are going on my Author Alert + Favorite Author lists. I've been on for quite a while now, and you're the first to have made it to both (or either) of the author lists. :P I dunno if that's an honor or not, but still. I think it's deserved. (Liek moar than mudkips!1!1!11!1 - yes, even moar than mudkips... I'm weird. :3)

I love Tarnished and Legacies... SethxEirika is my favourite couple, and this is one of few stories that completely does them justice, and then some. Beautifully written, great job!! Thanks!

A great sequel. It was lovely.

very nice, the best FE story I've read yet

Gods above!

First off, I hate this piece for the pain and suffering that it inflicted. I hate pain, hate to see it happen to anyone, and you did an excellent job at portraying a dizzying degree of that during the course of this fiction. I dreaded each new chapter, and at the same time read it avidly.

That being said... I loved the story for the devotion that was showed. Bonds of friendship, bonds of loyalty, bonds of love; all were tested during the course of the storyline. It was just as well written as the painful portions, and helped to soothe some of the frustrations that arose from seeing all this evil happening and nothing going right.

You've done a masterful job with this. I hope you realize that.

Really your stories are amzing, you are my favorite fire emblem writer.

I loved Tarnish and i loved Legacy, both are great stories and i liked that you did the sequel to the firts one. I must admit that in my mind yours stories are cannon, I can not seperate the game from your story. For me your stories are the true end.

Anyway I love them, they are faboulous. Oh, and there is something about the way you write... that is marvelous. Your style and your writing are incrdible, without a doubt.

Love your story a lot.

Keep up the great work and good luck in future stories.

Sincerly,
Nyrihaz

Finally got around to finishing this.

And I am quite speechless at the end of it all, except to say that I wish it would never end.

Heh, I am never good at giving any constructive critiscm. Just to point out a few things I like about the way you end it, is how you do not shy away from the resolution, giving us a huge dose of fluff, which is really much needed after the long conflict. Also, the flash back to the fall of Castle Renais was also rather touching.

Once again, a great fic, and a great sequel. Tarnish and Legacies are practically canon in my mind now. Keep up the good work!

Because of English, I'm not at ease with battle scenes and have difficulties to follow a plot with to much characters. This is why I did not read all of the the fanfiction. As you see, it has nothing do do with your writing stik, which is, by the way, Great.
Still, I want to review this last chapter and end of your story, for it is one of the more delectable, nice, sweet, deep, great, and respectable end of story I have ever seen.

In three fangirl word (yes, it's about time she be unleashed now) I LUV YOU !

... Ok. I think... you got the idea, didn't you?